Ptollemy [2010-04-26 10:35:18 +0000 UTC]
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I love this image - it makes me wonder what is going on, what has done before and what will happen next. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>The composition is excellent, the overall feel and mood suits the image really well, as does the tint and vignette.My only criticism is that the background behind the subject is much brighter than the model's face which I find a little distracting. I would have liked to have seen the model's face brighter as I feel this would make a strong image and remove the distraction of the background light.But overall a really strong image. Well done. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>
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Giggle-Monster In reply to Ptollemy [2010-04-26 12:19:41 +0000 UTC]
I totally agree about the background which is something I feel I'm still learning, trying to get that balance.Thank you again for the fair critique
Ptollemy In reply to Giggle-Monster [2010-04-26 12:49:19 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome. It is a fabulous image you should be very proud of.
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joseyjou [2012-11-30 14:11:18 +0000 UTC]
featured in my latest journal [link]
Giggle-Monster In reply to joseyjou [2012-12-03 06:37:47 +0000 UTC]
Thanks
Vellocet-Photography [2010-07-15 22:03:39 +0000 UTC]
Great job
PhyscoUnderGround [2010-04-29 17:51:28 +0000 UTC]
I would love to run around my high school looking like that XD
beanarts [2010-04-27 16:34:42 +0000 UTC]
Very nice work my only suggestion would be to make the "boarder" texture about 50% (or half) the visibility it is now. Just a little more subtle me thinks.I also like the colour tint
Giggle-Monster In reply to beanarts [2010-04-28 09:26:11 +0000 UTC]
Will look into it Thanks baby!
beanarts In reply to Giggle-Monster [2010-04-28 15:25:00 +0000 UTC]
Your welcome