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Description This is a story of a brilliant man called Henry who, one day, thought of an idea.

He joined his top executives in the morning of February the second and introduced what he said would be the boost his company needed to rule the market and to rule the world. Henry knew his most valuable asset was his employees, and, therefore, their time.
Henry felt that just like him, they were probably wasting away hours every day just thinking of things not related to work, things like silly family picnics or movie endings…
And so, Henry suggested to his executives the building of a new world. Of course, it would be called "Henry's world", as it should.
All of the employees will be forced to donate all non-work related thoughts that got in their work into this world, such as artistic vision, daydreaming, passing thoughts, and even indecisions. A world dedicated to all the non related work things. The company will have to pay for the new world, but the money will be easily compensated inside the work flow.

"Ohh, brilliant, brilliant!" his top executives roared. They knew this could make their employees much more effective in the work flow. How didn't they think of that first?

And so, a new world was founded. A parallel world, made from ideas and thoughts. The employees didn't like it much, but Henry didn't leave them any alternative. Besides, there would be extra time involved for them.
And just like Henry predicted, the work flow got better. Soon after the foundation of "Henry's world," the performance of the company went through the roof. Other companies had heard of what Henry did and wanted in. Henry picked some companies that were no threat to him, and charged them money for allowing their employees' private thoughts to join his world. Soon everybody wanted in. Everything was going great for Henry, but he couldn't have known what would happen next. Henry lacked the ability to predict and reflect on things.

Meanwhile, on "Henry's world," the thoughts got bored. They needed something to take them out of the thinking loop, some kind of a body to convert all the thought into actions. What are dreams if there could be no action to define them? What is an idea with no one to reflect on it?
Lacking a body to help them bring essence to their thoughts, Henry's thoughts suggested an idea. They should invite silhouettes to live with them on "Henry's world". That way, they could use an ally and create a worthy alternative to what they left behind.
It was no problem for the thoughts to persuade the silhouettes. The thoughts on "Henry's world" were very good in debating, and besides, there was no competition. Before too long, "Henry's world" was bursting with silhouettes running around with ideas. There was nothing missing there.

Meanwhile, on earth, people were starting to rebel. They were convinced there must be something more to life than work; they just could not remember what it was. A feeling of frustration was taking over. The work flow was getting slower and Henry was worried.
He joined his top executives in the morning of March the second and introduced what he said would be the boost his company needed to rule the market, and to rule the world. A merge between "Henry's world" and his company.

"Ohh, brilliant, brilliant!" his top executives roared. They didn't really think it over, but it was a work reflex to agree with Henry.

On March third, Henry sat down with Henry's thoughts and tried to work out the deal. They couldn't agree on the terms. "I created your planet, you belong to me!" Henry shouted. "I think not," his thought answered, and Henry couldn't disagree with his own thoughts.
Since they couldn't agree, the two worlds continued separately.

It was only after Henry died on October second that the two merged back into the world we all know.
Still, the time the two worlds were separate left its mark on our world. Up to this day when we look at silhouettes, it always seems that they know something that we don't.

Think about it.


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I hoped you enjoyed this little story.
If you found any grammar or typo, please let me know.

This was taken at Tel Aviv's harbor.
I was lying on the grownd to get this low angle, and get a sense of the wavy floor (for skates i think...)
I was lying there for 15 minutes to get a good silhouette passing by, when all of these appered at once and made me feel very lucky.

I hope you enjoy the photo, and the story.
If you want to read more of my stories, try these -
The things I've seen
Fishing For The Sun
The clouds painter
Damn that sun
The Unknown Prophets

Thank you!
G
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Comments: 355

feistysnowduck In reply to ??? [2006-03-12 06:57:00 +0000 UTC]

wow i love the picture and the story. i think i'm gonna have to you.

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wrighton363 [2006-03-12 04:23:16 +0000 UTC]

Amazing story and it's rather true in the sense of silhouettes do seem like they know something we don't and same goes with shadows.

and this picture. You truly remind me of HCB and his work in waiting for that perfect moment. Everything here lines up perfectly! The couple walking, tied at the hands. The bicycle riders that juxtapose one another. That bird that's leaded by the lamp posts. The other lamp posts add amazing lines that curve and the wavy floor which adds more lines/patterns. Amazing job.

and one of the good things of waiting is that all the grammar errors are fixed!

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gilad In reply to wrighton363 [2006-03-12 12:38:23 +0000 UTC]

Cool
Thanx!

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wrighton363 In reply to gilad [2006-03-12 17:03:02 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome.

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xMoNoox [2006-03-12 03:24:11 +0000 UTC]

Bravo ...
Love It xD

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alanByond In reply to ??? [2006-03-11 18:33:45 +0000 UTC]

the bird is like a point on I !!!

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Nivao [2006-03-11 16:43:18 +0000 UTC]

Strange, very Tim Burton.

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SomeInspiringTitle In reply to ??? [2006-03-11 15:44:51 +0000 UTC]

Patience, the virtue of a good photographer.

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effendi-x [2006-03-11 15:15:04 +0000 UTC]

your work has been simply breathtaking and beautiful. love it!

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strangelybeautiful [2006-03-11 15:10:55 +0000 UTC]

wow....thats deep....thats beatiful....thats breathtaking....that's a very sweet concept....its a wonderful photo....and a wonderful idea....sweet...and simple....i love it!

--
All we see and seem is but a dream within a dream.

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gdpr-1638154 [2006-03-11 13:36:17 +0000 UTC]

A great story and a great pic. I guess that that's the kind of work that creates a great shot; guess i wouldn't have waited 15 minutes to take it..

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gilad In reply to gdpr-1638154 [2006-03-11 14:16:54 +0000 UTC]

The waiting is easy.
It's the uncertainty of knowing, if in the end, you'll get what you want

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gdpr-1638154 In reply to gilad [2006-03-11 14:38:08 +0000 UTC]

Well, then what can we say about the film (vs digital)?

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wrighton363 In reply to gdpr-1638154 [2006-03-12 04:26:03 +0000 UTC]

HCB did the same thing and he used film

you should check his work out google>images>Henri Cartier-Bresson
he kinda termed this waiting for the right picture 'the decisive moment'

and `gilad 's work reminds me so much of his, just modern version.

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gdpr-1638154 In reply to wrighton363 [2006-03-12 12:21:17 +0000 UTC]

Yeap, i'm somewhat familiar wih HCB's work. Do you think that today he would still have used a film camera, btw?

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wrighton363 In reply to gdpr-1638154 [2006-03-12 17:00:30 +0000 UTC]

that's a hard question, but i think he would be do more painting and drawing. He really gave up with photography in his last days and somehow had this anti-view of it. but if he was still taking pictures, i'm sure it would be with film.

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modamor In reply to ??? [2006-03-11 10:53:49 +0000 UTC]

The light spot in the sky is appearing over exposed on my screen so I might adjust it and re-look at this because I really like it. The silhouettes work nicely with the curved ground and lights. I like the idea and style of this one, its really relevant to me.

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borahsarak [2006-03-11 09:10:37 +0000 UTC]

great lines...
i think you don't need to take these pictures...
you've got an endless scenery ahead of you, because you've got your tastefull vision my friend...
careography of the lighting poles are really nice...

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gilad In reply to borahsarak [2006-03-11 09:19:38 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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cheesellama [2006-03-11 08:45:11 +0000 UTC]

what a super picture. i really like the wavy floor. and the bird silhouette.

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culexknight [2006-03-11 08:25:58 +0000 UTC]

Like I said, movin' to Isreal.

Amazing picture, amazing little story.

PS. You have some very interesting journals. Makes me think.

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gilad In reply to culexknight [2006-03-11 08:35:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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ns-ahmed In reply to ??? [2006-03-11 07:05:06 +0000 UTC]

hats off,gilad!!! really nice story, you have some wonderful thoughts....didnt notice any particular grammar mistakes,but your sentence structure and wording...i dont know...it could flow a little better..but that will only come with more writing but i still love this one...the photo AND the story...why didnt u submit it under prose?
anyway then...

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gilad In reply to ns-ahmed [2006-03-11 08:37:34 +0000 UTC]

The story is a part of the picture, just as the picture is a part of the story.
I guess no category is totally fitting that concept of writing and showing in a balance.
G

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ditya [2006-03-11 05:12:56 +0000 UTC]

excellent compositions, the tone colors here really gives some dramatic athmosphere to the picture, it really tell us some story behind it.......

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misternow [2006-03-11 03:41:54 +0000 UTC]

wow! this looks almost other worldly... beautifully surreal! man... i truly love this!

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BurningKake [2006-03-11 03:16:15 +0000 UTC]

I love your stories.

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flyindreams In reply to ??? [2006-03-11 01:55:30 +0000 UTC]

The curved lines really create such a dynamic composition, but the overall feeling is still very serene, peaceful... gorgeous

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imaginepax [2006-03-11 01:51:19 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful and surreal story AND photo! You're amazing!

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COLOUR-FOOL [2006-03-10 23:38:13 +0000 UTC]

Wow Gilad, AMAZING! The combination of the story and the image is very powerful. Even before I read the story when I was absorbing the image, I was thinking these silhouetted lamp posts(?) look like creatures or beings from a parallel world, like they are almost growing up from beneath the ground. The shot is incredible, great perspective and surreal feeling, another masterpiece!

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gilad In reply to COLOUR-FOOL [2006-03-10 23:42:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!
I'm very pleased you liked it so

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geostant In reply to ??? [2006-03-10 22:30:37 +0000 UTC]

The shadows doesn't sits well
the couple on the right got a strong shadow toward the viwer

but the lamp posts doesn't have shadows at all


How come ?

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gilad In reply to geostant [2006-03-10 22:32:11 +0000 UTC]

The lamp posts do have shadows, but you don't see them cuase of the angle and the wavy floor.

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wingscannotfly [2006-03-10 21:27:05 +0000 UTC]

very surreal! i like it!

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vleta [2006-03-10 20:41:17 +0000 UTC]

Very well done!Really good work!

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yougottalove [2006-03-10 19:12:17 +0000 UTC]

Great pic

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lifelessonline In reply to ??? [2006-03-10 19:11:40 +0000 UTC]

So far, one of the best short stories I have read not only from you or dA but from anywhere else.
And once again, a fav, a comment and a thumbs up just dont seem to convey the admiration I have for your work. Respect.

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gilad In reply to lifelessonline [2006-03-10 19:15:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!
It's a huge compliment
G

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hottubmolly [2006-03-10 18:53:31 +0000 UTC]

i cant beleive the amount of thought and effort that poured into and out of this deviation. what possessed you to link the story to this shot, if you dont mind me asking?

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gilad In reply to hottubmolly [2006-03-10 19:14:08 +0000 UTC]

Ohh, that's easy enough
I just wrote it for the shot
G

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hottubmolly In reply to gilad [2006-03-10 20:34:06 +0000 UTC]

are you joking? if you did actually write that for the shot then hats off to you, Brilliant job!

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gilad In reply to hottubmolly [2006-03-10 20:43:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Brazilero2002 In reply to ??? [2006-03-10 18:52:01 +0000 UTC]

Superb Composition !

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gilad In reply to Brazilero2002 [2006-03-10 19:14:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you my friend

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this-euphemism [2006-03-10 17:53:26 +0000 UTC]

absolutely amazing

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MsBlueEyes [2006-03-10 17:48:41 +0000 UTC]

This was completely amazing.

The story, stretched my mind. I was complete entrapped within it. Loved it.

The picture is beautiful. I love the wavy look. Yes, you were very lucky to get it. I don't think I would have had the patience.


Marvelous.

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rubberman542 [2006-03-10 15:27:06 +0000 UTC]

Perfect tones and composition... this just oozes tranquility, I love it!

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jsmonzani [2006-03-10 15:10:58 +0000 UTC]

Great composition indeed!

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magic-medicine [2006-03-10 15:07:11 +0000 UTC]

so much things to look at...way to surreal in order to be real

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gilad In reply to magic-medicine [2006-03-10 15:15:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you my friend

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