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Published: 2012-05-16 03:05:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 10430; Favourites: 820; Downloads: 212
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for a long time i haven't drawn any art about vocaloid, so let's return with kagamine rin and lenRelated content
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Đây là suy nghĩ và đánh giá của riêng mình, chắc cũng có cái sai cái đúng, có gì thông cảm!
Mình thích cách tô bóng của bạn, cả chi tiết nữa. Kiếm vẽ rất đẹp, Rin cũng thế. Tuy nhiên cái tà váy nhìn kỳ ( Phần trên bọc vào nhưng phần dưới lại bung cơ à?) Đôi cánh của Rin, nên vẽ một ít lông vũ vào để tạo cảm giác đó là cánh.( Có thể như thế cũng đúng) Lỗi sai nhiều nhất là Len, cổ dài, phần đầu nhìn ko ráp với thân, cũng ko có cảm giác đang nằm, như thể đang gượng dậy, cà vạt lệch. Như mọi người đã comment thì nghĩa của tranh hơi khó hiểu, có lẽ bạn nên bỏ bớt mũi tên đó. Vì khi người chết đã đặt vào quan tài, khoong6 ai lại để mũi tên trên thi thể cả! Hai là vẽ mũi tên đâm thẳng vào bên trái, nơi trái tim ấy, thế mới đủ giết 1 người và cần thêm máu đọng lại. Ba là chết nhưng mặt vẫn nhăn nhó, miệng mở?
Sr, mình nói nhiều quá dù mình vẽ rất tệ ==! BTW, nhìn chung tranh vẫn rất đẹp, chắc mình soi mói quá.
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Hi! I state saying that this is my first critique, and my English is quite bad, so sorry in advance for that ^^
So, let's talk about the piece.
The concept is really interesting and amazing, the swords around them tell us of a battle, and her white dress gives to the scene some kind of epicness. Those crosses in the background are actually crosses or just the haft of others swords? Anyway, I still don't understand why, with all those swords, Len is dead by an arrow xD
The 3.5 stars to tecnique are due to the fact that, in my opinion, Rin should face more Len's body (her 3/4 head's position takes a little to the dramaticity of the scene), and his head seems a bit off respect his shoulders.
Another thing, if Len is dead (IF he is dead), his eyebrows should be more relaxed. If he's dying right now, they are done right.
However, this remain a wonderful piece of art and it will immediately go into my favourites!
Sorry again for bad english ^^"
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I'M DEAD?!?!?!?!? WHHHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY?!?!?!?!??!?
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I like it, every time I see something like this drawn it's always Rin who end up dead. So I really like the twist to it!
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Gosh... DAT Lineart and DAT contrast!... *speechles*
You did an amazing work with the details. I love how you did the flowers
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Look... so amazing... *A*
Len dies so much.... TwT
Can you please tell me what you used? I love your details~!
So jealous...
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alittle off with lens hair.... len and rin have the same length haair its just len wears a ponytail
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may i colour? i will post it and give you the credit for the pic :3
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sure ! let's colour it ^^
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WHY DOES LEN ALWAYS HAVE TO DIE?!? 
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YES! Found it! May I ask how you got the inspiration for this? ^^
-Rin
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it had a lot going on it is a great drawing dont get me wrong
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I have no words....none to describe how.....amazing this is...
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this is beatufull 
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This is really beautiful... I wish I could draw like that... You're really amazing.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! LEN DIED!!!!!!!! AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!
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Awwww Poor Rin, but you would have thought with all those swords one of them would have killed Len instead of an arrow XD
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Wow you can draw better than me. Would you mind if i color it.
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of course you can ^^ !
and you just send me the full color version after you finish it
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... I kinda want to give up drawing anything anymore... Because this destroys anything I could even conceive yet alone actually draw. Good job man...
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[link] here is the sword pic thing lol i hope i didn't mess it up too much
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excuse me may i use one of these sword designs for my oc i will always give you credit for it!
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of course you can ^^
look forward to seeing your art soon
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nice wings, flowers, swords, background, anything!
btw, isnt Rin's hair longer? but it doesnt matter to me
i really love how u drew Len's hair. idk why, since 2 years ago i've drawn those twins but i still cant draw that boy's hair
my first reaction when i saw this : THAT'S FUQIN AMAZING.
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This is so awesome, I love it so much~!! CX
This should be part of a manga.
Of all the pretty swords around, Len got killed by an arrow -_-;
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