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Published: 2010-06-01 07:10:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 1919; Favourites: 13; Downloads: 9
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Description OMG!!! It's DONE!!!!

I don't even want to talk about how late this is . . . sorry guys

But . . . it's done . . .

Just a crap load of dialogue over a rather sweet interaction between Kenyon and Riana . . . gotta love attempting to make exposition interesting

Those marks on Kenyon are scars . . . horse print on his chest from being trampled (if you look, his collar bone has a large bump where it broke and didn't heal quite right), bite mark on his arm, and there's some scratches on his torso that you can't see under the dialogue balloon.

Problems . . . oy . . . again, issues with consistency . . . and this time the dialogue is actually striking me as . . . clunky. But . . . I've been trying to get this darn page finished for so long that I just need to cut my losses and move along

I'm going to put a poll up and see if any of you are interested in seeing the page without the dialogue . . . I was rather proud of the first panel and you can't see most of it EDIT: Here's the textless version

And . . . just as a note . . . its HARD drawing a kiss when one of the people involved has a mustache! Just saying

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girl-n-herhorse In reply to ??? [2017-06-24 21:42:55 +0000 UTC]

I should go back and change Kenyon at some point, he has a new look But yeah, they're an adorable couple. I've written a bit about the two of them when they first meet which is way too cute

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AaronBrawnstone In reply to girl-n-herhorse [2017-06-24 21:44:25 +0000 UTC]

I should check it out then!

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girl-n-herhorse In reply to AaronBrawnstone [2017-06-24 21:47:06 +0000 UTC]

The first part is linked at the bottom of the artist's comments for Riana's profile

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silverwolvesarecool [2015-01-17 03:58:12 +0000 UTC]

Why does he have so many scars?

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girl-n-herhorse In reply to silverwolvesarecool [2015-01-17 09:14:24 +0000 UTC]

Horses can be a bit dangerous. One of those is a horse bite scar, another is an actual horse shoe where he got stepped on. There's no healer nearby so every injury has the potential to scar

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silverwolvesarecool In reply to girl-n-herhorse [2015-01-17 17:26:04 +0000 UTC]

ow

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Neptunes-Sparks [2011-08-28 20:19:48 +0000 UTC]

*snickers* bet Tiernan wasant happy with that comment

LOVE THE PAGE THOUGH!

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girl-n-herhorse In reply to Neptunes-Sparks [2011-08-29 02:56:00 +0000 UTC]

He never heard it so . . .

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Neptunes-Sparks In reply to girl-n-herhorse [2011-08-29 02:59:43 +0000 UTC]

o....what were we even talking about? *says in sarcastic voice(*

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Joce-in-Stitches [2010-06-01 20:04:36 +0000 UTC]

Looking good.

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girl-n-herhorse In reply to Joce-in-Stitches [2010-06-01 20:52:38 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Destinyfall [2010-06-01 17:42:27 +0000 UTC]

Wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo XD

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girl-n-herhorse In reply to Destinyfall [2010-06-01 17:43:54 +0000 UTC]



Well . . . at least I'm still plugging away at it

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winterelf86 [2010-06-01 15:54:54 +0000 UTC]

awwww this is so well done :3 And lol..its hard to draw people kissing period

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girl-n-herhorse In reply to winterelf86 [2010-06-01 15:58:00 +0000 UTC]

Too true . . . but even tougher when you've got to make sure that the mustache looks like it's on the right person

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RivisIndigoEmporium [2010-06-01 15:23:10 +0000 UTC]

Awwwwwwww...! I take it that old man was Tiernan, eeeehh...?

A nice little calm before the storm -- very cute...

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girl-n-herhorse In reply to RivisIndigoEmporium [2010-06-01 15:43:47 +0000 UTC]

Yep!

Although . . . I'm finding I like these two . . . a lot . . .

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RivisIndigoEmporium In reply to girl-n-herhorse [2010-06-03 14:44:56 +0000 UTC]

It always goes that way...

Although...I can't get over the two of them in the one panel where he's asking about Rysta -- he's being all sorts of cuddly and suggestive and she's more like, not so fast, you! Very cute!

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girl-n-herhorse In reply to RivisIndigoEmporium [2010-06-03 16:45:32 +0000 UTC]



I'm glad you caught that . . . she wants to get some things aired, and he's horny . . . that's one of the things I liked while I was drawing them, the dynamic was fun

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RivisIndigoEmporium In reply to girl-n-herhorse [2010-06-06 16:09:23 +0000 UTC]

The facial expressions were also very clear with this one -- great work all around!

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girl-n-herhorse In reply to RivisIndigoEmporium [2010-06-06 17:04:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

Did you take a look at the version without the dialogue? I posted it too . . .[link]

And . . . here's the family portrait I just finished . . . [link]

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RivisIndigoEmporium In reply to girl-n-herhorse [2010-06-08 01:04:08 +0000 UTC]

Commented!

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girl-n-herhorse In reply to RivisIndigoEmporium [2010-06-08 01:55:59 +0000 UTC]

YAY!

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LeoNeal-CP [2010-06-01 15:14:46 +0000 UTC]

Some important info in there looks great too! And dont worry about it being late silly woman lol

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girl-n-herhorse In reply to LeoNeal-CP [2010-06-01 15:44:43 +0000 UTC]

I have certain expectations for myself and it annoys me if I can't live up to them

Pathetic, I know

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LeoNeal-CP In reply to girl-n-herhorse [2010-06-01 15:47:04 +0000 UTC]

Well dont beat urself up too much lol

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girl-n-herhorse In reply to LeoNeal-CP [2010-06-01 15:49:33 +0000 UTC]

I'll try to be good

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LeoNeal-CP In reply to girl-n-herhorse [2010-06-01 15:55:23 +0000 UTC]

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Captain-Savvy [2010-06-01 12:10:40 +0000 UTC]

Another awesome page!!

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girl-n-herhorse In reply to Captain-Savvy [2010-06-01 14:54:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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alex-weiss [2010-06-01 12:02:03 +0000 UTC]

*sniffles* Wonderful job on this page.. the bodies are amazing ad look awesome.. Is that Tom Selleck stache he has there? XD

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girl-n-herhorse In reply to alex-weiss [2010-06-01 14:56:21 +0000 UTC]

Aww . . . thanks

Is it? I thought Kenyon's stache was a little more robust than Tom Selleck's (you're obsessed with that lately, aren't you? )

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alex-weiss In reply to girl-n-herhorse [2010-06-02 02:45:37 +0000 UTC]



Of course I am obsessed with the Selleck! It's epic! XD

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girl-n-herhorse In reply to alex-weiss [2010-06-02 04:36:45 +0000 UTC]



It is!

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the1cutemetalchick [2010-06-01 07:44:53 +0000 UTC]

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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girl-n-herhorse In reply to the1cutemetalchick [2010-06-01 07:49:07 +0000 UTC]





You are sooooo going to hate me in about 2 pages or so

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the1cutemetalchick In reply to girl-n-herhorse [2010-06-01 07:51:06 +0000 UTC]

................ *hates you in advance* what are you gonna do lady?!?!?!? O.O

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girl-n-herhorse In reply to the1cutemetalchick [2010-06-01 07:55:27 +0000 UTC]



You'll just have to seeeeee . . .

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the1cutemetalchick In reply to girl-n-herhorse [2010-06-01 07:57:16 +0000 UTC]

gah. *kicks* ;O;

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girl-n-herhorse In reply to the1cutemetalchick [2010-06-01 07:58:38 +0000 UTC]

Payback is hell, isn't it, m'dear?

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the1cutemetalchick In reply to girl-n-herhorse [2010-06-01 08:01:20 +0000 UTC]

>O< EVUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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girl-n-herhorse In reply to the1cutemetalchick [2010-06-01 14:51:26 +0000 UTC]

YESH!

Didn't think I had it in me, did you?

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the1cutemetalchick In reply to girl-n-herhorse [2010-06-01 15:27:08 +0000 UTC]

T____________T *whips out surgery gear* wont have it in ya for long amica (8<

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girl-n-herhorse In reply to the1cutemetalchick [2010-06-01 15:45:18 +0000 UTC]



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the1cutemetalchick In reply to girl-n-herhorse [2010-06-01 15:53:30 +0000 UTC]

;O;

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RivisIndigoEmporium In reply to girl-n-herhorse [2010-06-01 15:22:15 +0000 UTC]

Psh...I always knew you had it in you...

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girl-n-herhorse In reply to RivisIndigoEmporium [2010-06-01 15:45:45 +0000 UTC]

You betcha . . .

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RivisIndigoEmporium In reply to girl-n-herhorse [2010-06-03 14:45:10 +0000 UTC]

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DragonPress [2010-06-01 07:16:21 +0000 UTC]

i think its very well done
and yeah, i can imagine drawing a mustached kiss WOULD be hard

are those tattoos or scars?

and ooooh god - rysta's face is perfect in the "a little too rambunctious" panel! i love that

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girl-n-herhorse In reply to DragonPress [2010-06-01 07:20:37 +0000 UTC]

Scars . . . OH! I forgot to mention that *goes to edit the artist comments*

Yeah . . . I was pretty proud of that expression

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