Comments: 7
canad [2007-02-17 21:49:09 +0000 UTC]
"... un sospirto di ferro
e la vita che scorre
nel gelo incantenato di questo
fuoco morente
nient'altro mi resta
che un singolo gelido bacio"
a great idea... really
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GirL-PoiSoned In reply to canad [2007-02-18 16:20:03 +0000 UTC]
thkxx.
(sorry but I don't undrstand what you've written in Italian )
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canad In reply to GirL-PoiSoned [2007-02-18 21:39:25 +0000 UTC]
a breath made of iron
and life flowing in the chained cold of a dying fire
nothing else remains
but a single icy kiss
(thx to ~NelBeneONelMale for the translation [link] )
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GirL-PoiSoned In reply to canad [2007-02-18 22:06:01 +0000 UTC]
thxx a lot !
Nice text.
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sarahstrange55 [2007-02-17 02:37:26 +0000 UTC]
i think its fantastic, well done.
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