Comments: 11
lexie [2008-01-15 06:24:04 +0000 UTC]
I enjoyed reading this. As a matter of fact, I read it, went out for dinner, thought about it while eating dinner, came back and read it again. You are a brilliant artist with a unique and extraordinary way of drawing even the most ordinary objects, (such as triple chins, for example) but you are showing that you are an equally talented writer. I like the way you so eloquently illustrated this profound feeling of detachment and isolation. I also like that although seemingly disconsolate, you end the song in a positive light leaving the reader with a presumably hopeful outcome.
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gizmo55555 In reply to lexie [2008-01-15 19:25:16 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so much! It's nice to know that my work affects people and impacts their dinner-eating regimen, which i never in a million years thought it would. It really means alot coming from an eloquent and expressive writer like yourself, and I hope that one day my writing ability will surpass my triple-chin drawing method.
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youneverasked [2008-01-15 04:52:20 +0000 UTC]
But what if you get there and it's closed? (And I'm not talking about the Toast.)
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gizmo55555 In reply to youneverasked [2008-01-15 19:16:23 +0000 UTC]
You press on, of course. There's bound to be something else that's open all night.
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Italian-223 [2008-01-15 02:43:54 +0000 UTC]
I like this a lot!
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gizmo55555 In reply to Italian-223 [2008-01-15 03:47:06 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so much, andrew! Your comments mean alot.
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