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Published: 2017-07-23 01:02:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 2482; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 17
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Cover: Off-Field - Title Card
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props to the artist for the little spat in the background between the other two in the locker room. turned out really really cute. Stratus35
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Aww thank you 
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I'm glad you enjoy it! My buddy Stratus knows how to make the pones look extra cute.
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I cannot suppress the urge to critique the speech balloons in panel 4. It's my secret pet peeve or something. You could move Spitfire's balloons below Surprise and that other Wonderbolt I don't recognize, possibly reframing slightly, and nestle them with Dash's in the proper order. Then the panel would read much more smoothly.
Anyway, I'm surprised to see Spitfire admitting weakness or limitations.
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I know! Right?! Stratus did an awesome job on the page, and I'm psyched to see the next one he illustrates!Β It's such aΒ great way to kick off the story!
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Hopefully mine will be ready soon
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Yeah, just let me know when you have the whole thing squared away.
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I believe in you, Timelord!
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Thank you
I got most of the page colored still have a lil more work to Finnish up on
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Well that's good! It means you're at least close!
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