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Published: 2019-06-07 21:00:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 635; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 0
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Description broken bottle of
candor, here in the
agony of evening we
slander our past.

it's a pattern of
abuses, a wildfire
of nooses slipped out of
at the last moment,
of rags screaming into the night
in a fiery rage.

there are no cages
that can curse us,
no way to worsen our
stance. bones shattered
grow back to be
fortresses and you
should believe that my
middle finger is an
obelisk to god.

throw a dollar on the counter,
throw up just a bit
but swallow it. history
returns with gross
perspective; i might
learn if not for
blacking out.

if it weren't for
you i'd never make
it home. i have passed
the gutter that you
found me in more times
than i can mutter incoherently.

when i fall and
break my nose, we laugh
and rake the blood
across the cobblestones.
a flock of crows
to some but just
a fucking coronation
to the two of us.

i will keep your
crown around my neck;
you drop mine into your
jacket pocket. i will
write this into poetry
and you will claim to
read it.

we're too drunk
to see this hurting us
again.
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Comments: 14

StarlightComet [2019-07-01 17:30:08 +0000 UTC]

Didn’t realize how much missed your writingΒ 

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gliitchlord In reply to StarlightComet [2019-07-02 18:14:41 +0000 UTC]

that's a very kind comment that is currently pulling me back from a weird brink

thank you

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StarlightComet In reply to gliitchlord [2019-07-03 14:39:29 +0000 UTC]

Much love

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dialtonepoetry [2019-06-09 03:41:55 +0000 UTC]

God damn this is good!Β 

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gliitchlord In reply to dialtonepoetry [2019-06-11 15:47:16 +0000 UTC]

thank ya kindly

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thebalefulprimal [2019-06-08 17:14:25 +0000 UTC]

This whole thing is fucking brilliant, and I'm going to echo Bee - the last stanzas are so poignant.
I also love the hell outta this:

there are no cages
that can curse us,
no way to worsen our
stance. bones shattered
grow back to be
fortresses and you
should believe that my
middle finger is an
obelisk to god.

Definitely be proud of this

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gliitchlord In reply to thebalefulprimal [2019-06-11 15:47:09 +0000 UTC]

thanks ser

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Tiger--eyes [2019-06-08 01:09:16 +0000 UTC]

bones shattered
grow back to be
fortresses and you
should believe that my
middle finger is an
obelisk to god.

damn.

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gliitchlord In reply to Tiger--eyes [2019-06-11 15:46:14 +0000 UTC]

a little dramatic huh

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Tiger--eyes In reply to gliitchlord [2019-06-11 18:39:59 +0000 UTC]

a little killer

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MusicIsMyHeartBeat [2019-06-08 00:54:05 +0000 UTC]

very powerful use of words. i feel like i'm being punched in the face with each stanza.Β 

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gliitchlord In reply to MusicIsMyHeartBeat [2019-06-11 15:45:47 +0000 UTC]

that's a good effect, i like that

thank you

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beeswingblue [2019-06-07 21:04:44 +0000 UTC]

i will keep your
crown around my neck;
you drop mine into your
jacket pocket. i will
write this into poetry
and you will claim to
read it.

we're too drunk
to see this hurting us
again.

Another grand closing. This whole poem is a large dose of "ouch."

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gliitchlord In reply to beeswingblue [2019-06-11 15:45:33 +0000 UTC]

i'm glad it reads well, thank you

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