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Published: 2005-03-02 05:50:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 6957; Favourites: 108; Downloads: 88
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If I die tonightHow many people will be actually hurt?
How many people will ever cry for me?
How many people will ever want me back?
If I die tonight...
Will all my friends gather at my place?
Will all my relatives come to see me?
Will my teachers get hurt?
Will my admirers ever shed their tears?
If I die tonight...
Will I be missed?
Will I be thought about?
Will it make anyone sad?
Will it make any difference?
If I die tonight...
The sun will rise and set as it did
People might sympathise for a moment
Then will get back to their work.
If I die tonight...
I don't think it would make much of a difference to anyone!
Instead I would enter a new world
A new world where I can sleep forever
Forever and ever upon my Cloud Number Nine!
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this is amazing! I feel like this is questioned alot in my life...
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yery nice.... truth is.... i've been saying that for years....
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I got over it. I'm myself again.
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I am terribly sorry about the emotions you went through to make this, but I greatly like it. It gives people a new way of thinking of things and how trivial somethings really are.
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Ah, These words are far to familar to me love.
Good poem and the idea behind it is very real. I like how you entwinned emotion so heavily into your work.
Congrats you have Eddeh's stamp of approval.
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i think about that a lot. would any one notised i was gone. /i left the house for hours and know one noticed
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i think of that every time i get my ass kicked
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there's always someone who'll miss us somewhere in this world even if we never met that person.
excelent piece of art.
Lady-M
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I know how ya feel....I can relate to that powm in so many ways Good work
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This is how I feel right now. Like the world would care less if I just dissapeared from its surface...
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I am sorry if you felt so... but this feeling is too temporary.. it vanishes quickly.. life is too beautiful to end it without the feel of it... there is a lot to learn and enjoy in life... there are times of low, but the phase passes away soon, so we just got to have some patience and not take any drastic steps... strong enough to face the world, the reality!
And who cares for the world? The world does not care for you. It need not. But nature, the universe is bound to us. If we bind ourselves with mother nature, it is ultimate because it is real and eternal. This bond never dies.
Hope you feel better soon.
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That's very true. Thanks for the hug.
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pathetic....wasted.......souless...all i have to say
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wow.. thats a really good poem.. i wrote sumthin very similar and lost it...
and that continuation by Narain was really nice too.. just perfect..
But, some how i agree to your poem more...
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Hey thanks so much.... it felt like this once... and it does feel like this at times.... but, the world is good. Its just that we should know how to extract the good from the world and be happy. Putting an end to life is not at all the solution. One has to be strong enough to face WHATEVER comes in life.
Thanks for commenting, and the
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Hey dear, whats wrong? Can I help you?
Send me a note.
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my love just left me and... you now how it feels? no!?
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Maybe she just did not deserve you! There must be something better in store. So do not worry. Its all a part of life.
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heyyy
its really wonderful
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11 reasons not to commit suicide
If youβre reading this, there is at least a small part in you that doesnβt want to die. Listen to it, and please read on.
Suicide is final β once it's done, thereβs no changing your mind. Since you have even the slightest of doubts, you owe it to yourself to stay alive.
You can always kill yourself later, why not wait? Even if you wait just one day, you may find a reason not to kill yourself in the meantime.
If youβre feeling suicidal, youβre probably in more pain than you know how to handle. There are ways to reduce the pain, and ways to learn to deal with pain. You can learn both - either way things will get better.
Just because youβre feeling suicidal doesnβt mean you have to act on that feeling.
Consider this β if youβre trying to escape from the pain you are in and seek relief, suicide is not the answer. You cannot feel relief, or anything else for that matter, if you are dead. You must stay alive in order to feel the relief you seek.
Often when feeling suicidal you feel alone. You are not alone β you found us didnβt you? Turn to your family or friends or a priest or a rabbi β anyone that will listen. If you donβt know whom to turn to, use the links on the right-hand side of this page to find resources that can help.
By terminating your life right now, you terminate your future. Consider this β we create our own future. You have the power to create whatever future you wish for yourself. But you need to be alive in order to have that future.
If youβre sensitive enough to be in so much pain that you no longer want to live, youβre probably sensitive enough to care about, and want to help others. Maybe you donβt feel like helping anyone else right now, but why not help yourself? And perhaps by not killing yourself and overcoming your difficulties you can later help someone else who is in a similar situation.
Finally, donβt do it because Iβm personally asking you not to. Whatever youβre feeling, whatever youβre going through, things can get better β I know because Iβve been there. Maybe I havenβt experienced exactly what you have, but not only have I thought of suicide, I tried it β thankfully I was unsuccessful and I can speak from personal experience when I tell you things can get better
Lastley, one simple word; MUFFINS!!
Still with me? Good!
For immediate support, try calling one of the hotline numbers in our directory. You can also read stories of others who have felt suicidal and you'll see that you are not alone. Finally, browse our list of suggested reading and links or explore the other sections of our site where you can find more help on various topics. I also strongly recommend you seek out professional counseling, which can help you cope with whatever distress you are feeling.
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Please don't kill yourself,
That70show4
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well, this was just written out of frustration.
don't really mean it now.
Thank you anyways.
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I'm glad to hear that
You are welcome
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omg thats soo sad but it passes throu everyones mind at sum point. but i hope thats not how u feel!!!!!! But yes, take cae and faves for sure
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Yeah, these thoughts were just once upon a time... I don't feel that anymore....
Life is amazing!
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Nice but a bit sad, but that's seems to be the point. It makes me think
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I am glad it did. But the feeling was momentary. life is way too beautiful. Enjoy it.
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woa, it's been a while since i commented that.. but yea life is way too beatiful to waste
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If you die tonight, the world will change completly for your parents!
and in the end its never between you and the world, it was always between you and God. or your conscience.
If you die tongiht, guilt free, feeling that youve lived your life well...it does not matter who will miss,cry etc etc.... those things really shudnt be the point of consideration....anyways I guess when we die we would be more worried about what is happening!
i kinda get butterflies in my stomach when i think about such a deep topic.... i dont know what to expect after life........ i want to be able to die, but not right now not so soon , maybe after 400yrs
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I like your thoughts..
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well i like em too...thats why i think them up hehehw
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i love the poem you will be missed by more peopel than you know
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