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Published: 2003-10-05 23:30:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 3701; Favourites: 143; Downloads: 212
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I thought I knew you.I though you knew me.
Why is it when you need help you ask for me?
Yet your not there for me?
All I wanted was a hello,
but why do you make me feel alone?
Who do you think I am?
Do you not know of my powers?
Why do you treat me like dirt,
and step all over me?
If you want I can be your friend.
I will never leave you,
but you have left me.
Give me a sign,
let me know if you want to go.
Let me know if you don’t want me as a friend,
since I am still waiting.
still waiting for your reply.
I don’t know how long I can wait.
It’s been months
It’s been years
I don’t know how long it has been anymore.
I sit here all alone,
wondering how it could have been.
I still have your memories in my head,
they still haunt me
They still haunt me today....
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It is because of indifference. They go through emotional trama, deppression, and if they don'tcommit suicide, then it is because theyhave stopped caring. I know this is true, because I stopped caring about my social life. I don't show any emotion besides emptiness in public. It hurts, butwhen you don't care, the paiin goes away.
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that made me want to cry !
i felt that 2 years ago and i still suffer i can never forget .
she was my only friend and she walked way
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I lost a friend in that same way...she ompletely just stopped replying to my texts and messages, like she disappeared from the face of the earth...
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... This is how i feel right now. I love this guy named Ashy (dont ask, its a nickname) And well, hes rejected me all the time, yet he comes to me with his problems, as if he needs me. after that, im left alone again. It sucks, doesnt it...
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This makes me think of a friend that I have. I finally Tried to tell her that I was going to stop talking to her. She told me she was sorry for everything she has done and was going to make it up to me one day.... I really hope that happens. Like you this will never leave my mind.
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this may be sad but its really good totally can relate... its an amazing piece of poetry.
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i really like this. i don't know why though. it reminds me of so many things i don't want to remember.. but, kudos.
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wow, this is well written. many people can relate to this
it brings back sad thoughts
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i feel the pain from that for one friend of mine on here recently left i tryed to make a art peace finished it and he never saw it it might have stoped him why couldnt i stop him
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awesome..full of love and pain. I can feel it deep inside my soul... Thank you.
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Describes me perfectly. You have a very good talent with poems by the way, nice way of capturing emotions.
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love it im friends with this guy in real life (he also as a DA) but weve known each other for 2 years and i realy like him but he dont understand
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finally something that really comes close to what i feel, can i quote this? you'd be credited of course
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I feel the exact same way about my friend. This poem is perfect.
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i feel the same way right now.i cant hold i anymore...
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so sad and so true ):
it brings back recent memories...
this poem was great!
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I know.
It's better when people let their opinions out, when they're honest than when you never know.
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cool. makes me want to rethink my life.
^^ going strait to the favorites.
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awesome! That's how i feel right now. You used the exact words!
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amazing, thoughtful. deep and from the soul and veryunfourtunate
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amazing, thoughtful. deep and from the soul and veryunfourtunate
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I feel extactly the same right now.... It's a horrible feeling.
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This is really beautiful~
I've been looking for a poem like this
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Almost my thoughts and feelings exactly only portrayed more beautifully.
I just wish my friend would portray her thoughts and feelings as beautiful as that instead she just leaves me feeling so confused and lost...
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I dont want to make this sound weird, but that made me cry.
I loved it though, it did bring back sad memorries. I love it keep it up -sniffels-
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Wow. I like it , it says much to me to read this. It's like I read myself a couple of months ago. But I still like it, you are a good writer.
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This is heartwrenching, but an excellent marriage of visual art and poetry. I think it's really cool how you used the dark side of the moon to put the poem on; very symbolic to the nature of the poem, not to mention that the visual effect is there too.
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Sup thanks for the fav. 
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Great! It's nice to hear from you. I was actually just thinking of you last night and was going post a comment on your page. I've finnaly adjusted my gamma settings to 1.8 cause people were seeing things in my new space graphics that I couldn't. It's going to take some getting used to though...seems so bright, but I guess it's better for making graphics.
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Well I tell you what. Best for not only you but your eyes. Keep it dark until you want to work on such things or are about to submit it. Then just simply increase it adjust it to the way you like and then you are ready to go 
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Oh also omg... can't belive I forgot. Powerstrip I think it's called... it's a software that lets you control your brightness settings and other factors with hotkeys. That way you can set it up once and can go back and forth with your settings
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Im still pretty new here, don t know much about poetry, but I really like it it really expresses that sometimes we are very very sorry for the things we didn t do in the past or habe let them go by, also really likemthe image
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Well welcome to DA first off
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im new hear but i admire you. you phrase it all so beautifully.
"The claw
Of the magnolia,
Drunk on its own scents,
Asks nothing of life."
Syvia Plath
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Hey welcome to DA
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Interesting as in you like, or interesting as in your not sure
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no no no...interesting as in i like! the layout and the picture just fits it so well, its a great concept
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Oh thanks for clearing that up
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P.S. The moon with the words in amazing, great job
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Thanks... that was the plan
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1st off + Fav, this is amazing.... This has brought back yet another depressing memory of a day and time long past, you really turned raw emotion into something special here, excellent work.
P.S. Out of the two peices i've read of your they have both brought back suppressed feelings and memories, i dont know how to give you more praise then that, just know that you are special...
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