TakaraRazuro [2017-07-10 12:39:07 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful!
Almost as good as your other works.
I like the background (at least the bottom of it) and those little white dots. (I do not know what they are -maybe pollen- but it looks good.)
The perspective is interesting, but it is the cause of the problems.
The head is too oval.
It's look like as if an invisible line divide the picture. Above her eyes it is like we see her from front. Under her eyes, as if we see her from slightly above.
(I couldn't have explained it normally even in my mother tongue, but I hope the point is clear.)
Or perhaps that is not a problem, just my stereopsis is bad.
What's ruining the picture for me is that nose.
In my opinion such a nose does not fit for a cartoonish/anime style female character. The nostril makes this style a bit unattractive, and the right little nose line is completely unnecessary. (In your other drawings where you draw someone from side or half-side, I especially like this type of noses.)
You can draw full-body charters well too. Keep up the good work!
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Goodwil In reply to TakaraRazuro [2017-07-10 14:59:15 +0000 UTC]
Wow, thanks for taking the time to write a really insightful comment!
I don't really know what the white dots are either, I just drew them to make the background look a little more interesting (maybe it could be pollen - it would be fitting)
Thanks for pointing out the problems with the perspective and the issues with the head (and don't worry I understood what you were talking about just fine). I'll try to keep that in mind next time I draw a picture from a similar perspective.
The reason I draw nostrils is because I personally don't like drawing a single dot for the nose like some anime styles do. Although, I will admit that it does look a bit strange in this picture, so I'll have to improve on how I draw noses from the front in the future.
Thanks again for all the feedback, I really appreciate it Have a great day/night!
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