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A different color scheme, leaning toward warm gold, like Galaxia.My Celestial Sailor Moon will be appearing in this fic: [link]
Please critique design versus technique and figure, thanks.
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I like this scheme better than the others. The blue/red looks more like her Classic form. I'm with DR, there needs to be a splash of color somewhere because she looks so...monochromatic. Another color contest perhaps? 
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Hehe, I toyed around with the idea, but I'm very picky and I'm afraid that I'll hurt people's feelings if I don't particularly use the winner's color schemes for my character.
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I'm liking to gold in the fuku, but I liked the blue in the other scheme. Maybe a mixture?
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Baby blue and gold? Hmmm . . .
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I enjoy the design, but I don't feel there is enough contrasting/accenting colour. You have just white and gold, I do love the scheme, but it needs a bit more: "Pop!" Maybe a touch of blue in the front or waist ribbon?
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Thanks for the feedback.
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You are welcome for the feedback!
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I love those little onion people. Where are they from?
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I prefer this version of the fuku, although I think perhaps the gold is a bit too orange and strong in colour? Aaaah, I'm not quite sure, because the fuku looks very appealing otherwise, the colour parts vs. the white is very well balanced, and the design gives Usagi a royal and angelic look that I think suits her very well!
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I can lighten the gold for next time, only I hope it doesn't look too close to her hair color. It's hard when using traditional media, with only so many colors to work with.
Thanks for the feecback.
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Yeah, I guess computer colouring really have some advantages when it comes to the amount of colours to work with!
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omg i love this version! the colours used go together so well!
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I lik this color scheme, white and gold is simple but it shows the transition wonderfully.
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Thank you, that's very helpful.
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I prefer this version as opposed to the other version. You're aiming for a pre-Cosmos, as far as I've read in the comments, and this works nicely to illustrate that.
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Thank you for the feedback!
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I think this is the better color scheme, the pastel blue and pink weren't working toward the more...adult look?
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Gotcha. That helps a lot, thanks!
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Gold, I think, would be great. If she's an evolved form after Eternal, then it would help with her reaching Cosmos's level (which holds a lot of white and gold in itself).
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That's what I thought. I just don't want her to be unrecognizeable as Sailor Moon still.
What do you think of where I put the white vs. gold?
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Honestly, I thought that it was almost evenly spaced. It's hard to find a perfect balance when you use only two colors - especially a color that is so close to her hair color. It works better because her hair is yellow (similiar in color). The gold is fine where it is, I happen to think that the white is the more blinding (the skirt mostly). But I think it's because I don't pick up any shading
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I wondering about the skirt being white - but I don't think I want it to be gold either.
There's some shading on the hard copy, but as usual, scanners refuse to recognize it.
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Maybe the same color as her hair for the skirt? Or even more paler version of it (a pale version of gold, maybe?) I honestly thought pale blue but then I'm like Oo;, there's no other place that's pale blue, why would that be for the skirt, it would ruin what balance there was.
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You're so smart! 
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Awww... 
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Yes, that's what I'm going for.
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awesome! I'll try to read the fic when i get a chance
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Sweet.
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