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Published: 2018-01-16 22:04:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 214; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 0
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i did this with a mouse it was prety hardthe first one is Demona Feriss and the other one is Aragon Asiron
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For being done with a mouse, this is EXTREMELY well done. I love how these OC's are designed and the art style they are done in.
I am a little disappointed that the background is just white, but I usually have my transparent so it's not like I do much background work as it is. The symbols (especially on the red blood) are bordering on over complicated so be careful there. Troll symbols (when you make your own, like you and I do) should be well thought out but not too complicated so people can see the vision behind them.
I love the little detailing, like the white lines to accentuate the bangs and the small red heart in the spade, it all adds to the appeal, as does the shading.
All and all, I love this piece, and you should be proud of it.
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Wow that's my first critique and it was so helping to I'll try to redesign the simbols and about the background I'm working on getting better
Olso do you have any suggestions on how I can change the simbols
Olso
Do you think there's anything else about the design I can change
I think your advice is really useful and helpful so please feel free to say
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I can help a little bit, sure!
I was looking at the troll on the left,
and I like their design for the most part
but from what we have seen in the canon
of Homestuck, trolls have at minimum 2 andΒ
4 at maximum (like Sollux Captor) horns,
so I would suggest giving them at least 2.
Now I do have an idea you can do while still
leaving the large horn in the middle the focalΒ
point. Add two small small horns to either side
of the head so that they have 3 horns instead, butΒ
the big one is still the one everyone sees.
As for the one on the right, I was looking at her color.
It looks too bright to even be a mutant color, so I was
wondering if you got it off the hemospectrum.
If not, I will link you to the one I use, because it has aΒ
lot of variety and shows how the blood colors evolved into
one another and makes it very easy to have multiple trolls
of the same color without having their blood be the same hue.
orig00.deviantart.net/09ff/f/2β¦
As for the symbols, that is entirely up to you, these ones are actually
perfectly fine, they aren't too overly complicated but they almost got
there. No need to change these, it's just something to think about in
the future. I have my share of complicated symbols that I need to fix
and change ^^'''
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Oh okay thanks for the wery good advice I'm taking it to Hart
I'm going to inpruve them as much as I can
The horn idea is really good indeed I'm going to use it and the homospectrum you sent will help me soo much
Ps
Do you by any chance have an oc that's a self insert
Cuz I kind of made my self a trol just for fun
Cuz I thought it would be fitting cuz my last and first name has 6 letters
(I'm such trash)
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Oh sweetie, making an OC of yourself is really
only a self insert if they're a mary sue or gary stu!
Otherwise, it's a persona. I DO have a trollsona designed
of myself but I never really use her. The term "Self Insert"
is more derogatory and insulting than anything else.
Plus, all your OC's should have a small piece of you in them!
That way you can relate to and understand your character
more!
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Oh OK thanks for telling me geez how much more nice can you be your so cool
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I am really glad you think I am nice! I try to be ^^
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You should be proud of yourself
Ps
So who's your favorite troll
I'm sorry u know I'm trash
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i'm trash too, don't worry.
I like the Vantas family because
I related most to them and RP
them all really well, but I would
have to go with Equius. I love him.
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I really like Equius! A lot of people think
he is kinda creepy but I love him.
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That's so cool i honestly love them all even Eridan
I honestly feel kinda bad for him
But my favorite must be Nepeta I relate to her the most
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My boyfriend cosplays and voice acts
all the ampora's. ^^
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Omg that's so awesome=3
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I think so too. He's REALLY
good at it too.
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Ohmahgoodness these give me goosebumps theyβre so cool
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Awww thanks thats nice of you to say
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