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TheViditofLight [2017-02-11 11:37:34 +0000 UTC]
Alright, I am coming at this from the perspective of someone who's not a Supernatural fan, really, though I've a friend or two who is so I'm not entirely unfamiliar with it...
...that said, this story intrigues me for elements independent of that-namely that we're seeing a tiny society and how our shrunken protagonist has adapted to living among it-especially being an "outsider". I even find myself enjoying how you're working the difference between Lia and the folk she lives with now-how she's creating a wingsuit of sorts to help her fly like them. And now she's got to help someone else adapt to living in the world out of scale, too-looking forward to seeing more of just that part, at least-more of how Lia's life goes on in this capacity, how she makes her way in the big world!
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GT-Kathryn In reply to TheViditofLight [2017-02-11 18:28:26 +0000 UTC]
Ah, having such a detailed post about my story really does make me happy!~ I was so surprised to see this pop up in my notifications!
Lia does have an interesting little life here set up for her, and with everything that's been going on, it's about to get a little crazier. That said, there will be more backstory to come, so have no fear! And I have a few more characters thatΒ I want to introduce into this whole thing before the line starts getting to the real action. But thank you! Even without you really watching the show, I still appreciate you coming and commenting on my work c:
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GT-Kathryn In reply to nightmares06 [2017-02-04 18:28:10 +0000 UTC]
So smol. So precious. Lia's getting attached c:
Thank you!~ Glad you like it.
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Drag759 [2017-02-02 16:13:20 +0000 UTC]
What can I say other than gawΒ how precious! Again I'm in love with how you describe the setting and the emotions are set out perfectly. Keep this pace up!Β
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GT-Kathryn In reply to Drag759 [2017-02-02 22:51:10 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad my descriptions seem to be getting better and better! I've been trying to make it more... picture-esc to make it easier to kind of get a sense of where Lia and the others currently call their homes. And thank you, I'm super happy that my pacing seems to be just right! Always makes me feel good about my writing when I know I'm doing okay c:
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