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bratzgirl16 [2010-02-04 22:17:28 +0000 UTC]
in the end, don't we all just want to believe that we're right? Very nicely done, in my opinion.
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yourbonesmymirror [2009-12-05 23:13:19 +0000 UTC]
Of course.
The thing that hurts more than anything is knowing that you'll get over it.
It just... stings. =\
Meh. Good poem, though, even though you don't like poetry. Or poets.
>.>
<.<
-Leaves-
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theunbeingdead [2009-12-05 22:26:09 +0000 UTC]
clean. you have a nice, no nonsense way of getting your ideas across that appeals to me.
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Almost-Certain [2009-12-05 11:31:17 +0000 UTC]
I dislike poems that rhyme.
I hate poems that rhyme.
But this... This is a good poem.
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aboutapixie [2007-11-12 02:47:11 +0000 UTC]
i'm going through some relationship problems. cheers to being upset. you are like a modern day bukowski hah
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guiltywhiteboy In reply to aboutapixie [2007-11-12 04:31:37 +0000 UTC]
that is basically the greatest compliment i could get
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ohmydahling [2007-11-06 08:04:58 +0000 UTC]
It's like really cold campbells soup.
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mrs-sparrow-depp [2007-11-02 05:41:02 +0000 UTC]
I especially dig the line about winter sitting on mountains.
I hate when people tell me that as well. Let me be upset over the loss and I'll move on, I don't need their assy comments...and often times its by people who haven't been through it.
Hang in there, kid, and keep writing. Its amazing.
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