Comments: 6
Anleva [2007-10-10 14:04:59 +0000 UTC]
I think its great, cant really see anything you need to fix.
I will describe it like..Hmm strong and mening ful, I like it alot
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HackberryLane In reply to Anleva [2007-10-10 21:02:02 +0000 UTC]
wow you actually like it? Oo I could have sworn the ending sucked... >>; thank you! ^_^
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Whynotletmelive [2007-10-10 06:55:48 +0000 UTC]
those r some strong werds...
they sound like they have a lot of feeling and meaning behind them..
to me i got that the game was life... thats wat i got from the poem,
but everyone gets different meanings from poems
as u well kno,
i dont kno why u dont like the end
i think it fits well.... and the way i read it it had meaning and flow,
a good ending to a great poem
definlaty faving this
xoxoxox
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Whynotletmelive In reply to HackberryLane [2007-10-11 06:14:08 +0000 UTC]
yer i would agree its very complex... makes u think...
....
xoxoxox
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