akai-ruku [2005-08-12 22:22:44 +0000 UTC]
OOh Ahh wow. Very Nice! this is totally excellent work, your really improving alot. I love the expressions, there super tight and emote really well.
Im gunna nitpick, like these are tiny things, but her center of gravity seems off, or almost off in the firt one.
And this is jes a design crit. If this is for the teapot painting, and i think it is. youl prolly redraw the character at a point. Jes try in like a thumbnail or something with a really puffy dress out the back, all really oldschool victorian, making it alot more cumbersome and extreme, maybe with like a huge bow or something. It looks almost modern at the moment, like really practical. Thats jsut a though if you want to make it more victorian.
Very nice work though, I really like it and it looks very functional, another illustrator, modeler or animator could pick it up and use it quiet easily. Tight costume design aswell.
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gamerplus [2005-08-12 18:43:04 +0000 UTC]
Very nice, I like her clothes and the expressions on the side.
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