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redacegod350 [2015-06-09 00:35:37 +0000 UTC]
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This a simple girl grows while on a swing. Which is always great. Her expression is good and pretty realalistic given if this were to really happen. But this is where I get to some of my problems, my biggest beef is the lack of background. The overall drawing is great, but the background hurts it sadly. Now the house and fence are fine, it's just the lack to detail, like a road, some trees and bushes and clouds e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="19" height="19" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="417" title="Sweating a little..."/> The other problem is the seat Hana is sitting in is too long, and given her size, should not be visble. How ever, if one of the chains were to break before the other, only one side should be seen. But if both chains broke, it should not be visable. The size of the seat for the guy next to her is off as well. Lastly her hair looks a bit stiff, but that is all the problems I can list. Even though I did list a lot, this is still a great simple and cute drawing. But one thing I was impressed by was the shadow effect you did, that was nicely and skillfully done. So it's not all bad. All and all, it's a great GTS drawing for all to enjoy.
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HanaChronicler In reply to redacegod350 [2015-06-09 01:09:50 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much for the critique. I had completely forgotten that I had requested for this one. I'm glad that somebody answered the request! ^_^
Thanks again, HC
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ChipmunkRaccoonOz [2014-04-17 20:35:43 +0000 UTC]
Bad luck, Hana. (hugs her ankle)
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supersaiyanGO In reply to HanaChronicler [2014-04-17 22:21:02 +0000 UTC]
By the way has hannah ever gone to a movie theater and fallen asleep midway through?
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HanaChronicler In reply to supersaiyanGO [2014-04-21 17:12:56 +0000 UTC]
I don't know, a giant Hana would make me feel safer. ^_^
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supersaiyanGO In reply to HanaChronicler [2014-04-21 19:20:08 +0000 UTC]
Well depends on if the house is insured against giantess damage I suppose then.
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Haiyou [2014-04-16 16:08:17 +0000 UTC]
Digital and Traditional Drawings from you are both looking good
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Haiyou In reply to HanaChronicler [2014-04-16 19:41:27 +0000 UTC]
Do you always thank guys? ._.
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