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HanaChronicler — Hana's Broken Swing - Coloured

Published: 2014-04-16 15:51:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 3718; Favourites: 43; Downloads: 65
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Description This is the coloured version of 'Hana's Broken Swing - My First Inked Sketch' .  All I used MangaStudio for in this was colouring and shading.

Let me know how you think this compares, relative to my previous art, which were all fully digital.
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Comments: 16

redacegod350 [2015-06-09 00:35:37 +0000 UTC]

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This a simple girl grows while on a swing. Which is always great. Her expression is good and pretty realalistic given if this were to really happen. But this is where I get to some of my problems, my biggest beef is the lack of background. The overall drawing is great, but the background hurts it sadly. Now the house and fence are fine, it's just the lack to detail, like a road, some trees and bushes and clouds e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="19" height="19" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="417" title="Sweating a little..."/> The other problem is the seat Hana is sitting in is too long, and given her size, should not be visble. How ever, if one of the chains were to break before the other, only one side should be seen. But if both chains broke, it should not be visable. The size of the seat for the guy next to her is off as well. Lastly her hair looks a bit stiff, but that is all the problems I can list. Even though I did list a lot, this is still a great simple and cute drawing. But one thing I was impressed by was the shadow effect you did, that was nicely and skillfully done. So it's not all bad. All and all, it's a great GTS drawing for all to enjoy.

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HanaChronicler In reply to redacegod350 [2015-06-09 01:09:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much for the critique.  I had completely forgotten that I had requested for this one.  I'm glad that somebody answered the request! ^_^

Thanks again, HC

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redacegod350 In reply to HanaChronicler [2015-06-12 03:05:48 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome and I hope I wasn't too harsh

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ChipmunkRaccoonOz [2014-04-17 20:35:43 +0000 UTC]

Bad luck, Hana. (hugs her ankle)

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supersaiyanGO [2014-04-17 17:57:48 +0000 UTC]

Looks like hanna must have lost control for a coupleseconds

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HanaChronicler In reply to supersaiyanGO [2014-04-17 19:36:13 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, she was having too much fun on the swing! ^_^

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supersaiyanGO In reply to HanaChronicler [2014-04-17 22:21:02 +0000 UTC]

By the way has hannah ever gone to a movie theater and fallen asleep midway through?

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HanaChronicler In reply to supersaiyanGO [2014-04-17 22:57:18 +0000 UTC]

No, not yet, but she saw a horror movie once and scared herself bigger.

See Hana's Horror Movie Mishap .

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supersaiyanGO In reply to HanaChronicler [2014-04-21 16:18:22 +0000 UTC]

You might want to keep her away from haunted houses then

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HanaChronicler In reply to supersaiyanGO [2014-04-21 17:12:56 +0000 UTC]

I don't know, a giant Hana would make me feel safer. ^_^

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supersaiyanGO In reply to HanaChronicler [2014-04-21 19:20:08 +0000 UTC]

Well depends on if the house is insured against giantess damage I suppose then.

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chibiBiscuit [2014-04-17 10:48:11 +0000 UTC]

I agree with Haiyou, both mediums look good. The digital does look a little more clean and refined, but I think the traditional is a little more natural. Anyhow, wonderful work on the coloring here, the whole picture turned out awesome.

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HanaChronicler In reply to chibiBiscuit [2014-04-17 11:11:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!   I am still experimenting with the outlining.  I might try a black prismacolour pencil on my next sketch and see how that works.

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Haiyou [2014-04-16 16:08:17 +0000 UTC]

Digital and Traditional Drawings from you are both looking good

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HanaChronicler In reply to Haiyou [2014-04-16 19:39:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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Haiyou In reply to HanaChronicler [2014-04-16 19:41:27 +0000 UTC]

Do you always thank guys? ._.

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