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harrimaniac27 In reply to ??? [2011-07-26 02:38:27 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! and...Thank you! XDD What'd you like most about the writing?
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Ksterstone In reply to harrimaniac27 [2011-07-26 02:42:13 +0000 UTC]
I loved when Smithers finally got the tie right and asked him "I suppose it's...back to...business as usual?" <3 VERY Nice.
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harrimaniac27 In reply to Ksterstone [2011-07-26 02:57:48 +0000 UTC]
XDD Thanks! That was a favourite part of mine, too. XD
If you liked that, you may like my fan fic that I'm starting. I'm still on chapter one, but I'll work on it tonight...[link] X3
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harrimaniac27 In reply to ElysiumFaridat [2011-07-18 22:19:30 +0000 UTC]
Well, I'm glad I can be of help! And you needn't "repay" me...Anything I can give you is yours. XD
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harrimaniac27 In reply to ElysiumFaridat [2011-07-19 02:12:50 +0000 UTC]
aww...well, you are friendless no longer!
I don't see you being a moocher! What do you mean? Mooching what?
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ElysiumFaridat In reply to harrimaniac27 [2011-07-19 23:57:55 +0000 UTC]
Of course, I'm certain it will be. Hey, if you ever need a favour just call on me and I'll do my utmost whatever the reason ^_^
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harrimaniac27 In reply to ElysiumFaridat [2011-07-21 01:33:23 +0000 UTC]
Luv: hear this now, ok? I will never become bored of you, so you just put any notions of that to bed ok? and yes, you should get to bed, too luv. I'm looking forward to hearing from you tomorrow. *returning your luv* XD
LOL We're all a little crazy in the morning...but if it's not strange, or creepy of me to say this, it would but kinda cute to see your hair all messed up from the pillow...
I, on the other hand, would look like a crazy, deranged hippie-man in rainbow, zebra-print boxers....not a pretty sight at all...
You've helped my self esteem a lot too! You like my artwork, and you complimented my smile...(nobody ever does that)...you read the first chapter of my story and actually talked to me about it...You're making me feel like I'm worth something, and that really means a lot to me.
Ohh...your ex boyfriend sounds like a bit of a lout...I mean, it's alright to take things lightly, but there is such a thing as "taking things too lightly"...
and having long conversations with somebody is the best thing about a relationship, be it just a friendship or something more. My favourite thing about my closest friends is that we can talk for so long that we lose track of time. I can't imagine anyone who can't do that...
What d'you mean "it wasn't exactly pretty" when he got serious? Did he hurt you?
My dearest friend, I am so glad that I can give this to you. You have made me feel more important than I have ever felt, and I want you to know that I will give you everything that I can. I may have already told you that our chats have given me something to look forward to each day, but if I haven't, I want you to know that; and I also want you to know that I appreciate that so very much. I woke up this morning thinking of you, and I worked all day on that picture you inspired me to do. You have given me the push I need to get things done...in fact I almost feel like going out and running a marathon.
..I don't feel as though my words can express what you've done for me...because all of a sudden, I've become a bit clumsy with them...but I do want you to understand that you are very important to me, and that you mean quite a lot to me. I am proudly yours, too my friend. XD
so goodnight...and until tomorrow.
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harrimaniac27 In reply to ElysiumFaridat [2011-07-21 21:23:25 +0000 UTC]
LOL really? wow...you're the first one that's said that, ever...
Haha I'd never cease to be happy and full of life with you around!
Sadly, I have been unhappy and devoid of life before...it always used to be that way...But with a little help from my bagpipe band, and you, I'm feeling like sunshine more every day. I'm usually a nervous wreck the day before classes start, but thinking of you keeps me calm and happy. XD
XD I wear obnoxious colours most of the time...it's my own little way of rebelling, since I usually look like something that's just walked out of the 1970s...XD but yeah.
It's amazing to think of your eyes being brought out so much by a blue shirt...sure they'd mystify me if I ever saw it...
I remind you of sunrays? That's so wonderful...XD
To me, you're like a morning mist...soft and refreshing; a sight to put one in awe...and yet you're warm, like a good cup of tea in a safe place to be...as inviting and comforting as a hug....Here I go writing a poem about you...and still there's more that I just can't put words to....
Wow...did I mean to rhyme that, or does your friendship just weave my words together?
You amaze me, Elyssia...it seems as though you're my inspiration. XD
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harrimaniac27 In reply to ElysiumFaridat [2011-07-21 21:51:55 +0000 UTC]
XD I look forward to the picture with anticipation. XD
Ohh...Believe me, I know how you feel. I was bullied a lot around that age too, and as a result of that, I tend to hide myself in a bit of an "imaginary castle" as it were, that's protecting me from being hurt...if you want to know more about that, you can note me...I don't really think anyone will see it, but it's very personal...and I don't think it needs to be in a comment box...
And don't worry: I actually think I may be on the autistic spectrum as well....I only have my suspicions, though...nobody's ever told me for sure...at first I thought I was schizophrenic, but that was a little far out....I've actually never told anybody about my suspicions before, though...
Since you're so special to me, I will share with you anything about myself that you want to know: ask anything, and don't worry about my feelings...I trust that if you ask me, you are genuinely curious and not just trying to be nosy.
Ohh...I wish I could really hug you right now. ...I feel as though I've been making a fool out of myself, but you seem to accept everything I do that I thought was strange...I usually feel so awkward around people, but with you, I truly feel as though I can be myself...and that is so rare. Thank you so, so very much. I can't even begin to tell you how grateful I am to be your friend.
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ElysiumFaridat In reply to harrimaniac27 [2011-07-21 22:05:33 +0000 UTC]
Yes, I understand that, anything personal we can easily talk about via note.
I still tend to lie low in college, I sometimes eat with everybody else but I don't enjoy it. I'm there for the knowledge aspect (unlike many of them).
Autism itself is such a vast spectrum remember and that seems to be what confuses people. I'm barely on it actually, I was diagnosed because of social anxieties and changes in my routine which are classic characteristics. I really felt depressed when I was diagnosed because I thought I was too different to ever fit in.. which is still quite correct. I'm not popular just because I'm shy and seemingly strange to some. But it's really not bad, especially when I did some research of my own and found out that a lot of autistic people are very intelligent, logical and talented people.
It's alright, I'm hardly ever one for asking of questions, I dare not poke around in your affairs, if I do ask something you don't want to answer, just tell me to bugger off lol.
Why would you feel you are making a fool of yourself? I see greatness in everything you say and do - that's why I accept everything you say and do
It is strange also that I feel so calm during our chats, like I can finally let it all hang out and just be me in any sense. Oh I'd just like to appear on your doorstep and give you a hug also. More grateful I doubt I can be.
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wiekoh In reply to harrimaniac27 [2011-07-18 23:22:24 +0000 UTC]
I can give you brief examples of what I mean.
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harrimaniac27 In reply to wiekoh [2011-07-19 18:47:39 +0000 UTC]
I'm finished reading it.
I'll be honest: I liked the way the dialogue moved through the story, but the descriptive language used in the passage was a bit thick for my taste..it didn't really paint a good enough picture in my head of what was going on, and it seemed that too many descriptive words were used when the author could simply have been concise...
Plus, it was very hard for me to tell what was going on...at first it seemed as though they were flying the plane, and then it seemed that they had just been passengers...then, the next thing I know they're in a car...
In my opinion, the language describing their surroundings was so thick that it overshadowed what was supposed to be happening in the story. When reading it, I got so caught up in what was around them that it was hard to focus on what they were actually doing. That kind of thing is ok when done in moderation, but when it's constantly done throughout the entire length of a chapter, it gets hard for me to stay with the story.
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wiekoh In reply to harrimaniac27 [2011-07-19 20:34:55 +0000 UTC]
Oh wow. You didn't have to give a review of it, because it's not my work, and I'm not supposed to be posting it without permission, but that was nice of you nonetheless.
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wiekoh In reply to harrimaniac27 [2011-07-19 21:12:40 +0000 UTC]
You raise some valid points. Unfortunately, this story was written for the intensely literary genre, so what you dislike about it is precisely what it is aiming for.
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harrimaniac27 In reply to wiekoh [2011-07-19 21:14:18 +0000 UTC]
Well...I suppose It's alright if like that sort of thing, but I must confess that I'd rather read something a little less thick...
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wiekoh In reply to harrimaniac27 [2011-07-19 21:19:47 +0000 UTC]
Of course. It's purely a matter of taste. The good news for you is that you could get a mass following with your writing style. Louderandlouder is targeting only niche groups. Yes, I was an English major, and yes, I'm more accustomed to the arcane and experimental literary style, BUT because I'm totally "agnostic," I love your style as much as I love the literary style. I do not prefer a genre: All that matters to me is that someone writes well in whatever genre they're writing.
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