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HauntedDragon005 — The Balance
Published: 2007-02-24 13:47:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 54; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description Down into the dank darkness.
Up into the night,
Let the beautiful black surround you,
Breathe in the star dust,
And feel the milky way,
running like silk over your body.
Drink in the moon beams,
Bathe in their light,
The golden light that chills.
bathe in this harsh darkness,
shiver in the moonlight.
Look up as it starts to rain,
Pelting you with ice.
Sit down and revel in the pain.
The rain won't fall forever.

Pale child, look up it's morning,
Let the sunlight bring you to life.
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Comments: 6

LoLa-Lost-Heart [2007-03-01 02:26:55 +0000 UTC]

man this is so deep...
i love it to death...

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HauntedDragon005 In reply to LoLa-Lost-Heart [2007-03-01 08:08:05 +0000 UTC]

thanks I'm glad you like it

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moon-bunnies [2007-02-24 15:00:42 +0000 UTC]

I get the image of morning glories from this piece... but morning glories mean a lot to me. Maybe I'll write about them. Love this.

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HauntedDragon005 In reply to moon-bunnies [2007-02-24 15:40:14 +0000 UTC]

Glad you like it, please do! I love your poems.

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theverbamar [2007-02-24 14:21:59 +0000 UTC]

nice rythm here

i hope its true

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HauntedDragon005 In reply to theverbamar [2007-02-24 15:38:25 +0000 UTC]

thanks, yeah I think it's true. That's what keeps me hopeful even though life seems to really suck sometimes.

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