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Published: 2014-01-30 02:11:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 23406; Favourites: 349; Downloads: 0
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This comic is discontinued
Story by 11thinv and can be found here: carolynmarks1.blogspot.pt/2013…
Characters (My Little Pony) © fyre-flye , Hasbro
Human concept by me
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"This comic is discontinued"
Well, that's a pity.
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The client didn't respect my conditions so the fault is on him for that. And if it makes you feel better the story wasn't anything interesting and original, it was just a copy of the book Henry V and the only difference is that the cast was ponies.
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So just because you mother was a potentially power-hungry tyrant, you will do as she wanted? And shed seas of blood?
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That's politics. If she didn't made it rough, the other would see this as an act of weakness. And start new wars, longer wars with bigger states that have ACTUAL AND LIVING power-hungry tyrants.
And even more, the prince insulted her. It is NOT acceptable.
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wow~ Celestia is not a force to be reckon with! XD
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the guy with the beard?
he's the ambassador from
escambria
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Such a shame this is discontinued :/ I wasn't all that invested in the story, but it was a way to get tons of awesome expressions and poses of human ponies from you.
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Well this was discontinued because the person who asked me for these pages wasn't totally honest from the beginning with me, only after doing these he said that he intended to publish a book after the whole thing was done and, not only I do commissions for personal use only but it's also illegal because these characters aren't mine or his.
Anyways, since you were just looking up for this because of my art then don't worry because I'll keep making pony art in the future.
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Ok....I am pretty much terrified by Celestia now! Was this truly an insult from the Prince of Escambria or was this a message of good will that was horribly misinterpreted? Either way this is not going to end well at all is it? And leave it to Pinkie to chime in at the worst possible time!
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I get the feeling of being terrified by Celestia, you should've seen my reactions as I advanced these panels, so much dark energy around. '8D I'm going to need to draw the Celestia we know and love after I'm done with these to get back some positivism.
I'm not sure, this is just my guess, I think the ping pong balls was a metaphor for an insult, like "you have no balls, Equestria". I think this because there will be a war after this situation... '>_>
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Really? Celestia is going to go to war over a thousand year old treaty that could be considered null in-void and a bunch of ping pong balls? Why? Is this tinny piece of land so important that she is willing to condemn thousands to death for it. Because that does not sound anything like Celestia, unless you are writing her to be evil and is trying to conquer the world or something.
Honestly if I was this prince I would personally go to see Celestia, ask to see the treat, go inside the closest bathroom, take a dump, then use said treaty to wipe my butt before handing it back to her. Because what right does a dead man have to signing over my nation after he has been rotting away in some long forgotten tomb for a thousand year? His signature is worth less than the paper it was written on or the dung that is now smeared across it.
Of course following this I would return to the army I had waiting for me along the border which I would then use to invade Equestria before Celestia had a chance to gather her own forces and invade Escambria since she was obviously using the treaty as an excuse to do just that.
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i guess you just don't get it
she didn't write this
i did
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Then my comment is directed toward you. Now while I was not being overly harsh in my criticism, I actually do enjoy you write for the rest of the comic. It is just here where it seems to be approaching the ledge and if you don't take the time to explain why Celestia is taking such drastic actions then it will go over the ledge and head first into a pile of rocks. But I do have confidence in your ability.
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everyone's relationship with their mother is
different
that's why i came up with the treaty business
i was struggling with tia's motivation for turning into such a warmonger
because otherwise i thought this was a good fit for mlp
& for good bad or indifferent
this is what i came up
with
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So she is doing this only for the sake of her mother's honor. Well in that case, DOWN WITH EQUESTRIA AND ALL HAIL ESCAMBRIA!!!
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If you can't beat 'em
Join 'em
That's my philosophy
Any who's
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Well they DID ask for it.............
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Did they? Celestia invoked a now-null and void treaty to say that she owns their butts? What was she expecting as a reply?
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Damn. Who would've thought Celestia would be a hardass about this.
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I guess you could say,
She's got BALLS.
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
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Dude, I just clicked on this and I LOVE how you draw Celestia!!!!
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that's why i commissioned her
when i saw her human mlp designs i said
i have to write something for this
artist
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Is this base of Henry V by Shakespeare. I reconised the speech
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Yes, you are correct, it is based on that.
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And my English teacher said I didn't pay attention in her class. Ha!
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Hehe, nice going, you just proved her wrong.
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For some reason everything Celestia said I heard as if she was Galandriel from Lord of the Rings (specifically when Frodo offers her the ring).
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I love Luna's expression in the last panel, it pretty much says "Oh no, Tia has gotten power hungry!"
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this better be about a ping pong battle or else this is going to get kinda lame
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I think Celeastia is having these period of the mounth...
That's what you get if you replace Lauren Faust with George Martin.
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Yes you are correct, in fact the author of the story based this on Henry V.
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