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kaffeeheini [2015-06-19 22:20:32 +0000 UTC]
What a cool story! Except for the transformation itself of course, it all sounded so realistic. I love these detailled psychological aspects.
(Good thing i learned english in school instead of french.) I hope, you will proceed with this story soon.
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MensjeDeZeemeermin [2015-03-30 03:12:17 +0000 UTC]
I don't think you have much at all to apologize for in this ongoing story--you're being quite thoughtful about the changes the new anatomy would have on her daily life and how she'd interact with people. She's in for some mental issues--her memories are in a different body than the one that shaped her earlier, there will be new urges and instincts. I thought the 'preview' at the end was a bit out of place, but I very much enjoy this tale and hope you don't subordinate it to your other work.
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TheAnimeGuyFTW [2015-03-28 22:45:15 +0000 UTC]
Just asking, when are you writing another tg story?
Thanks, and awesome story so far.
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HeavensShadow In reply to TheAnimeGuyFTW [2015-03-29 04:35:58 +0000 UTC]
Thanks.
Sadly, I don't think I can offer a time-frame. I always have different story ideas (many of which TG-related) swirling around in my head; hopefully I'll be able to focus on one enough to put it down on paper soon. I have a couple of somewhat concrete ideas at the moment. But I am also fairly busy with school, which has affected my creative productivity. The best I can say is that there will be more.
My most recent TG story (The Drink) was removed from Deviantart due to content violating the terms of service. It was kind of the sequel to The Vaccine. If you didn't have a chance to see that one before it got taken down (I think it was up for a week), I have posted it elsewhere. Feel free to PM me and I can send you a link to that story.
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TheAnimeGuyFTW In reply to HeavensShadow [2015-03-29 19:05:03 +0000 UTC]
Yes I did read that one and it was amazing. And I understand you can't get another tg in because of school.
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bes1919t [2015-03-28 16:58:33 +0000 UTC]
A great chapter. Lena is learning quickly.
I found 2 errors, but I lost one of them.
After a bit, I let Aurora go and laid up partially onto my belly, though I allowed my hind legs too sit out to the side.
too should be to
edit:
Found the other error.
I felt a discomfort in my guy and I frowned.
guy should be gut
Wait. You said you didn't proof-read this? I'm not sure I believe that...
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bes1919t In reply to HeavensShadow [2015-03-29 15:10:25 +0000 UTC]
I think you managed to roll the writing and proofreading into one step.
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