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phoebehorselover [2017-11-11 07:57:11 +0000 UTC]

Okay, so this is rendered and drawn very beautifully. Couldn’t find much to crit except on the focus and direction of the composition. IF the horns are the MAIN LOOK HERE focus, then yes you done good. Because it is so saturated that it is almost hard for the eyes to focus on anything else- the other parts of the paintings beautifully done such as body face and hair. It MIGHT help if you had that brightness else where as well?? When I look at this piece, my eye travels from the horns down, to the feet, over and over again, and then off the painting because the leg are serving as a compositional line that leads the eye down to the foot and sometimes off page. Also the feet looks a little off. I know that its not the focus of painting, but I would make sure the form is shaded correctly at least. And yeah like ketchco said, the other leg is a little wonky-the angles are off, and feet sizing. Okie das all I can think of rn~~ don’t take my blunt critiques personally, hope you improve LOTS <3

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sylveonrhi [2017-10-01 05:09:07 +0000 UTC]

your art is amazing and a lot of it belongs in a gallery

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sylveonrhi [2017-10-01 05:08:28 +0000 UTC]

do you still do requests

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ketchco [2017-09-28 18:14:28 +0000 UTC]

the blur is super nice, really helps bring focus to the front areas, the flowing hair gives the pic a really "fresh" feeling(??? don't know how to describe it) but the hair, dress, and pose gives the pic a lot of motion/movement which is super nice, the face is drawn really nicely as well, and the coloring on the horns are really nice, i like how bright they are, it's nice to look at. the strandy texture of the dress is cool too.
critique: since the back foot is going as far back away from the camera as it is, maybe it should be drawn a bit smaller?
super nice overall!! the curves on the limbs are really nice as well!!

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RisingMuffin [2017-09-24 00:24:12 +0000 UTC]

Oh my goodness, this looks amazing!

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