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Published: 2017-11-20 17:23:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 1134; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 0
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Description ~ Amza Haiducul * ~

"They say that, on the banks of the river Jiu, a mob of brave men is gathering, men with a backbone, sick of the way this land is governed -- outlawed, like you and I. Show me the way, Murgu, and I'll be forever in your debt."
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I've started working on a short-story set in -- prepare yourselves -- late 18th century Romania (I had to step out of my comfort zone both in time and in place, right?) Meet Amza, the protagonist!

 Plot:
The story takes place in the South-West of Wallachia (Țara Românească, as it was called in Romanian) in a chaotic time for the country, as it was the field of many disputes between the Phanariote Greek voivods that ruled it and the Romanian boyars and constantly invaded by Ottoman and Russian forces. Amza is a 30-year-old boyar who commits a crime against his father-in-law and is forced to run away. With the authorities behind him, Amza runs towards the woods south of the town of Craiova where he hopes to meet a famous band of outlaws (called haiduci in Romanian) and join them in their fight against the foreign attackers and the oppressive regime. While on the run, Amza is helped by a gypsy boy named Murgu and his sister Narcisa, who are also hiding in the woods.

 * Haiducul = "the outlaw" (Romanian)
      Boyar = member of the aristocracy in Slavic countries (between 10th and 18th centuries)

Amza is wearing a Astrakhan-style hat (made of lamb fur, after the fashion of the Turkic peoples), sheepskin coat, is armed with two pistols and probably a cutlass named hanger, while the style of his hair and moustache is the one in fashion among 18th century Romanians. Some historical examples here: leaders of a peasant revolt  ; a famous outlaw Iancu Jianu

I'm just brainstorming for now, so I don't expect to see the story finished in the near future; but do expect a portrait of the other protagonist Murgu, and probably his sister Narcisa

Media: ink pens
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Comments: 13

charcoalfeather [2017-11-21 00:49:24 +0000 UTC]

Yay, another story from you, this time in a totally new setting! It's so great to see another character who is from a setting we're not used to seeing from you. Amza's expression looks very intriguing here, and we can tell before reading the description he's running away and thinking of joining outlaws or something like that, something that would get him into trouble ordinarily!

I really likethe stylized way you've done the woods behind him. The leaves remind me a bit of Bilibin but with a Gothic twist. I really like how you did the fur on his hat and clothes as well!

What format will this story be in? Will it be like your short stories, or a novel like Sons of Disobedience? I can't wait to see more about the other characters! How old are Murgu and Narcisa?

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HelevornArt In reply to charcoalfeather [2017-11-21 10:32:35 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot for the amazing comment! I'm glad the style made you think of "Bilibin but with a Gothic twist", that's a cool way to describe it

It will be like my short-stories, perhaps about 7 pages long. It only spans a couple of days + an "epilogue" happening a few weeks later. I've outlined the story and I have a few dialogues (of course, I always start with the dialogues, they are the most fun part ), but I need to do some historical research since it's a very chaotic period with a ton of foreign influences in Romania (everyone is fighting over it, no one actually rules it since the vassal princes are driven away every few years xD) and it's not clear enough in my mind.

Murgu is 17 and Narcisa is 14-15. It will be interesting to show the relationship between brother and sister, since I never did that. At first, the focus of the story seems to be on Amza since he's the one who is reluctant to talk about his life and what exactly made him become a runaway (he's the nobleman who lost everything, while Murgu had nothing to lose in the first place), but we gradually come to see that the psychological focus is in fact on Murgu, who has deeper things to hide.

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charcoalfeather In reply to HelevornArt [2017-11-21 16:26:47 +0000 UTC]

Interesting, I really want to see the shifting focus of the story and what kind of secrets that Murgu has. This will be a great study of psychology!

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HelevornArt In reply to charcoalfeather [2017-11-21 18:38:58 +0000 UTC]

I hope so ^^

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charcoalfeather In reply to HelevornArt [2017-11-21 19:43:56 +0000 UTC]

Will you do colour portraits of the characters?

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HelevornArt In reply to charcoalfeather [2017-11-21 20:32:49 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I will! First I'll draw the 3 of them in ink and then in coloured pencils. It will also be interesting to draw different skin tones than I usually colour.

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charcoalfeather In reply to HelevornArt [2017-11-21 20:56:13 +0000 UTC]

Great, I can't wait to see them! And the outfits will be interesting too.

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dragondoodle [2017-11-20 18:27:23 +0000 UTC]

I am intrigued! Can't wait to find out more

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HelevornArt In reply to dragondoodle [2017-11-20 18:38:04 +0000 UTC]

 Thanks a lot for the interest! I'm really excited by the idea but, as usual, I don't have enough time to think it through right now, so I hope my own interest won't fade before I finish it (as I have lots of unfinished stories lying about )

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dragondoodle In reply to HelevornArt [2017-11-20 18:46:43 +0000 UTC]

I hear you Best to get the rough outline written down so you don't forget it though

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ERA-7 [2017-11-20 17:23:59 +0000 UTC]

Glad to know that there is people who can do such cool stuff Wish you every success and have a nice day!

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HelevornArt In reply to ERA-7 [2017-11-20 18:38:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!

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ERA-7 In reply to HelevornArt [2017-11-22 07:22:23 +0000 UTC]

Welcome!

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