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charcoalfeather [2017-11-21 00:49:24 +0000 UTC]
Yay, another story from you, this time in a totally new setting! It's so great to see another character who is from a setting we're not used to seeing from you. Amza's expression looks very intriguing here, and we can tell before reading the description he's running away and thinking of joining outlaws or something like that, something that would get him into trouble ordinarily!
I really likethe stylized way you've done the woods behind him. The leaves remind me a bit of Bilibin but with a Gothic twist. I really like how you did the fur on his hat and clothes as well!
What format will this story be in? Will it be like your short stories, or a novel like Sons of Disobedience? I can't wait to see more about the other characters! How old are Murgu and Narcisa?
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HelevornArt In reply to charcoalfeather [2017-11-21 10:32:35 +0000 UTC]
Thanks a lot for the amazing comment! I'm glad the style made you think of "Bilibin but with a Gothic twist", that's a cool way to describe it
It will be like my short-stories, perhaps about 7 pages long. It only spans a couple of days + an "epilogue" happening a few weeks later. I've outlined the story and I have a few dialogues (of course, I always start with the dialogues, they are the most fun part ), but I need to do some historical research since it's a very chaotic period with a ton of foreign influences in Romania (everyone is fighting over it, no one actually rules it since the vassal princes are driven away every few years xD) and it's not clear enough in my mind.
Murgu is 17 and Narcisa is 14-15. It will be interesting to show the relationship between brother and sister, since I never did that. At first, the focus of the story seems to be on Amza since he's the one who is reluctant to talk about his life and what exactly made him become a runaway (he's the nobleman who lost everything, while Murgu had nothing to lose in the first place), but we gradually come to see that the psychological focus is in fact on Murgu, who has deeper things to hide.
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charcoalfeather In reply to HelevornArt [2017-11-21 16:26:47 +0000 UTC]
Interesting, I really want to see the shifting focus of the story and what kind of secrets that Murgu has. This will be a great study of psychology!
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HelevornArt In reply to charcoalfeather [2017-11-21 20:32:49 +0000 UTC]
Yes, I will! First I'll draw the 3 of them in ink and then in coloured pencils. It will also be interesting to draw different skin tones than I usually colour.
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charcoalfeather In reply to HelevornArt [2017-11-21 20:56:13 +0000 UTC]
Great, I can't wait to see them! And the outfits will be interesting too.
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HelevornArt In reply to ERA-7 [2017-11-20 18:38:14 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!!
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