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Her-sourness — Spirited Away
Published: 2008-02-07 05:46:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 2001; Favourites: 54; Downloads: 3
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Description For every step she took,
The inner strength she held shook.

As her steps rang through her ears,
She felt a longing, hidden for years.

His words rang through her head,
Warning her with a feeling of dread

" Don't ever look back"
She saw his smiling face
Soft glittering eyes,
seeming so out of place.

Directed at her with such a tender care
Strong and sure, but with a wavering stair.

Her family called her, her footsteps grew slow
And something deep inside told her not to go.

To turn around and run back to the wonder
To the place that had changed her forever.

With a sudden halt, she forced her head forward,
hearing his warning
Staring skyward.

" Don't ever look back"
Said his soft voice

She ached to disobey
But she had no choice.

He said he would see her.
He said he'd come through.

To be by her side.
It was the least he could do.

But as she ran forward,
the path guiding her way

She longed for her next chance

To be spirited away.
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Comments: 10

mewmewnya1 [2016-10-05 20:28:55 +0000 UTC]

OMG *Clap clap clap* Almost had me in tears over here this is amazing! You did an amazing job with this poem!

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RandomRaindow24 [2016-03-29 03:06:08 +0000 UTC]

*slow claps*
*claps*
*stands up and applauds*
*cheers*
*kinda cries*

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icejuliet314 [2015-05-26 11:16:18 +0000 UTC]

Best. Poem. EVAR!!!

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Animegal244 [2013-05-01 11:50:08 +0000 UTC]

That's beautiful! I really love this.

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Lady-Revolution [2011-12-26 03:35:17 +0000 UTC]

This is so good! I especially love the ending! I'm rewatching the movie now I want to write an epilogue for when they meet again

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frostyneko121 [2008-06-28 17:49:30 +0000 UTC]

aww...im not a poetry-type person....but i loved it!!

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Her-sourness In reply to frostyneko121 [2008-06-30 09:21:14 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, i'm glad you liked it

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puppytina123 [2008-06-12 01:49:35 +0000 UTC]

Simple yet riveting. In other words, just plain awesome!!!

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Her-sourness In reply to puppytina123 [2008-06-21 21:53:08 +0000 UTC]

Aww, thanks

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relhom [2008-02-07 17:27:44 +0000 UTC]

Don't read any poetry but this seems very nice!

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