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Heroes-Die In reply to TiaraShin [2012-06-27 21:13:53 +0000 UTC]
Yay! Thanks for the read!
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LionsQuill [2012-06-20 12:55:57 +0000 UTC]
Wonderful job portraying the voice of the Geth. This was so well written! I really like the flow of everything, how you began with their initial awakening and took it all the way to their final evolution. Bravo!
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Heroes-Die In reply to LionsQuill [2012-06-20 14:46:33 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much! The Geth were awesome to write--how could they not be with Legion on their team? But thanks again for your thoughts and glad you liked it!
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hollyand [2012-05-17 20:13:10 +0000 UTC]
I loved this, though it made me tear up a little. Legion is my favourite character in the Mass Effect series and his sacrifice - and final self-actualisation in the moment of death - was so sad.
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Heroes-Die In reply to hollyand [2012-05-17 21:02:49 +0000 UTC]
Glad you enjoyed it even through the sadness...oh Legion. He is so awesome. Live on, Legion, in all your geth buddies!!
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Richard-Coimbra [2012-04-30 07:14:44 +0000 UTC]
Portraying a character as alien as Legion is difficult and you did a good job. I do like how "he" grew more individualistic with time. I also like the accuracy of the in-game dialogue.
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Heroes-Die In reply to Richard-Coimbra [2012-04-30 14:32:18 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so much! I love keeping my characters and dialogue as canon-based as possible. Thanks for reading and glad you liked it!
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Nemonus [2012-04-24 17:13:27 +0000 UTC]
Nice job writing from Legion's point of view. The use of "we" in some places and "I" in others is great. My only critique would be that you use a lot of in-game dialogue, but this is a very creative perspective and definitely a different look at the theme of the contest. Nice job!
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Heroes-Die In reply to Nemonus [2012-04-24 18:52:24 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for reading and for telling me your thoughts! I wanted to pick three defining moments from each game, which is why i chose to do that, but it was cool to get into the geth consensus for a while. They have a very interesting role in the universe between the games. Glad you enjoyed it, and thanks again!
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Heroes-Die In reply to saiyanprincesscat [2012-04-24 03:15:04 +0000 UTC]
I'm overwhelmed by how awesome your comment is. It's readers like you that truly make me want to keep writing, and that you even guessed my motivations by straying away from any romantic plot...You are a smart cookie. A peanut butter cookie, perhaps? But seriously, thank you so so much. I really appreciate the time you took--not only to read this--but also to write such an eloquent response to it. I really appreciate every word.
Plus, your sig is so damn wonderful. Oh, Kreia.
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Simili84 [2012-04-19 01:19:24 +0000 UTC]
Nice story, you should also add in the disclaimer that the image used is from Adam Sidwell [link]
peace
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Heroes-Die In reply to Simili84 [2012-04-19 01:43:39 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! And thanks for the reminder about the link. I forgot in my hurry when I uploaded it to add it in, so now it shall be done!
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XLegion-716X [2012-04-18 21:44:15 +0000 UTC]
(sniff) that was epicly beautiful. R.I.P Legion...
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Heroes-Die In reply to XLegion-716X [2012-04-19 01:04:45 +0000 UTC]
Thanks kindly! I hate that you couldn't save that perfect little geth.
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XLegion-716X In reply to Heroes-Die [2012-04-19 05:17:12 +0000 UTC]
I hated that scene with a damn passion
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InverseReality-2 [2012-04-18 04:27:32 +0000 UTC]
I love that you always give us a unique twist to each story! Brill!
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Heroes-Die In reply to InverseReality-2 [2012-04-18 14:40:18 +0000 UTC]
Yeah! Choosing the weird stories to write is a strange peoccupation of mine, but I love doing it. Plus, if you like reading it, that makes it all the better.
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