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Published: 2008-01-02 14:05:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 1475; Favourites: 39; Downloads: 40
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This is the lineart part of a collaboration withCompleted.
I intend to do more collaborations with this awesomely talented individual this year :3 Keep an eye out for the completed CG with colours by Sooj when it's done
Wondering whether to upload it here or on her dA...
UPDATE: SHE FINISHED!!! ON MY BIRTHDAY!!!
Trying to loosen up my drawings and get back to my roots. I feel like I was losing the love of drawing because my works were becoming too stale and rigid... I intend to change that this year.
My only real personal qualms with this piece is the subtle inaccuracies in her clothing... like.. her left arm's glove at the wrist is meant to be hollow/loose instead of a donut and I think given the angle of her hips/waist there should be more ass and less pants... but I suppose I didn't want her to look nekkid (this time). Let me know what you think
Time taken: 20mins
Materials: A4 Printer Paper, Mechanical Pencil (HB) + Eraser
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Comments: 23
I'd love to color it, but I've never been good at inking sketches. This will be challenging!
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I'll clean it up some time when I'm not so busy
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Feel free to, just remember that if you are posting it, include a link to the image and/or my deviant profile and credit me for the piece, and gainax for making easily one of the best anime series EVAR.
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Thanks! Finished! Tell me what you think?
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weeheee collabs~ Can't wait to see what Sooj does color wise with this =3
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hehehe
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Very nice, But like I said, before at Sooj's, the fact that her spine seems to be forming a right angle with her lower spine is kind of weird.
I like it alot none-the-less.
Underboob for the win.
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before at sooj's? o_O I just drew this like a day ago.
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I gotta point out... her upper spine seems to be on at least a right angle to her lower spine. She must be a bit of a gymnast
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The sexiest kind XD
But I concur... I shouldn't have exaggerated her pose too much.
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I really like her pose, its very much Yoko. I understand what you mean, sometimes I don't want to draw, or I lose interest, but I got to keep on drawing... its what I'm going in to.
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Actually, on her right hip, with it being down so far, you wouldn't see anything past that panty-line, except maybe some frills. If you can see her stomach, you shouldn't be able to see that much of her back, too. 
PS- it may be the foreshortening, and I just can't see the definition because it's not colored, but her right hand seems a little small in general.
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her right? I don't quite understand where you're getting at with the right hip thing.
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when i get back to a wacom (saturday) i'll sketch over in red to show you.
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dunno dude why you so woried about your art , it woudl take me 2 hours to do somthing liek that , and it would not be as loose and fun. damn you asns!
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it's because us azns can't see with our slit eyes, so we scribble on a piece of paper until we think there's a drawing on it.... then we ask other people with good vision if the lines make a picture.
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