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HikyuuTera — The Hitokiri's tool..
Published: 2006-11-13 06:43:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 215; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 2
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A sword stained,Stained of blood,
Slices through the air.
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It's silvery steel glistening
With crimson light,
As the full moon above shines.
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It's length covered by death
And broken innocence, as the thick
Dark crimson falls from it's sharpness.
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This sword stained of innocent blood,
A tool of death and suffering.
Knows nothing more than to strike.
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It gives no mercy on it's victims as
It's owner weild's it's blade.
Crimson liquid, liquid of life, falls
And splatters upon the Earth.
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I like it, it's beautiful in a way that dismisses the subject as morbid and has a gentle and graceful feel to it. Btw, victims doesn't have an "o" in it, lol. I hope you dont take my observation as criticizing, I just know that I'd like it if someone told me that I spelled something wrong in my deviations.
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Yeah lol thanks I fixed it ^_^x
It's okay ^_
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this really fits the fan fiction being put up in the hitokiri club. ^__^
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O.Ox Which fanfiction? *probably needs to check her devwatch stuff more.. but she hasn't been on the computer much.. will eventually have everything up to date.*
Thank you! 
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Bu godsspiker (I think that is right) it is related in a strange way, only two chapters were put up but the fic moves fast.
You're welcoem. I always enjoy reading your Kenshin stuff. ^^x
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O.Ox
Bu godsspiker?
ohh.
I find I can't write without writing about Kenshin 
Thanks again
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And thank you soo much for the fave. ^_^x
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Thank you for commenting and the fave.
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no problum!
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O.Ox
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Don't worry about it. Your welcome.
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Domo arigatou, Aoshi-dono, de gozaru na.
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