Comments: 9
morqwal [2010-06-23 04:06:27 +0000 UTC]
this is a very tf delicious piece. a power angle for the female jinn, it more emphasizes the lowered nature of the man. folded clothes on the ground are a powerful cliche, and with the angle and the brilliant line job, it is not trite. good composition, i'd like to see more like this.
the only thing i could see improving is making the mouth smaller on the jinn, which would give her a more feminine beauty look.
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hippo2 In reply to morqwal [2010-06-23 10:06:16 +0000 UTC]
Right! I have to work on her mouth. You're the second person during last week who pointed this out.
Thank you for the feedback.
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morqwal In reply to hippo2 [2010-06-23 15:29:41 +0000 UTC]
well, i hope it doesn't discourage you. ^^ just try to point out what you got right, and a little thing you could do better
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hippo2 In reply to morqwal [2010-06-23 19:30:24 +0000 UTC]
Don't worry. I know where I have to improve now. Thank you for the feedback.
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morqwal In reply to hippo2 [2010-06-24 04:42:45 +0000 UTC]
^^. good luck art champ!!
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Agent505 [2010-06-19 15:15:22 +0000 UTC]
"She turned me into a newt!"
Looks around... man is a man, not a newt...
"Well?"
(shrugs)
"Got better."
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crazykattykid [2010-06-19 09:59:39 +0000 UTC]
your getting good at this.
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hippo2 In reply to crazykattykid [2010-06-19 10:01:37 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!
If you browse through the Martha series, you can see how my style developed.
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crazykattykid In reply to hippo2 [2010-06-19 10:09:55 +0000 UTC]
I hate to tear on my own thank you or compliment but your improvement is more of a statement then a compliment, keep up the good work.
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