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Hjemi In reply to Pseudowitch [2017-09-30 10:24:49 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou!  Not quite yet, but I have been thinking up a few ideas. I'll probably flesh them out later on. ^^

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Pseudowitch In reply to Hjemi [2017-09-30 10:32:40 +0000 UTC]

Have you ever seen the short film Shelter? It might give you some inspiration. Your OC reminded me of that film.

www.youtube.com/watch?v=fzQ6gR…

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Hjemi In reply to Pseudowitch [2017-09-30 11:05:20 +0000 UTC]

Oooh! Yes I have seen it when it came out!

Honestly I'm really excited that he reminded you of such a magnificent work of art as Shelter ^^

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Pseudowitch In reply to Hjemi [2017-09-30 12:56:16 +0000 UTC]

It did, quite honestly. Alone yet surrounded by a virtual world of his own creation he had become lost in.

I truly hope they make a sequel to Shelter, the ending, although beautiful, was rather sad.

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Hjemi In reply to Pseudowitch [2017-09-30 14:53:13 +0000 UTC]

It was, though in the end I feel it was a good way to end it.
Leaving the world open like so after all let's the viewer wonder and decide themselves what happens next: does the ship land on a distant, habitable planet? Does she die in the ship?
Or something else?

Of course I wouldn't mind having a sequel, that would be magnificent. But an open ending like that can work wonders.

I honestly just wished they would explain how she has survived there for the time being haha, sure the girl had some tubes that probably were feeding and providing nutrition to her body. But how about her muscles? Without getting regularly moved around they should have withered away already...
I know I might be nitpicking a lot but I can't help it.

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Pseudowitch In reply to Hjemi [2017-09-30 14:57:44 +0000 UTC]

I wondered the same thing, actually. Only back to your OC. Why not call him Cyan. It is the same name of the blue hue he closely resembles.

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Hjemi In reply to Pseudowitch [2017-10-01 07:51:08 +0000 UTC]

I'm thankful that you want to help out, I mean no offense but this is still going to be my OC, so I would like to decide these things myself...
Of course critique and such will appreciated ONCE I make a proper character introduction.

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Pseudowitch In reply to Hjemi [2017-10-01 09:52:11 +0000 UTC]

I understand.

I look forward to the reveal.

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Hjemi In reply to Pseudowitch [2017-10-01 11:19:40 +0000 UTC]

Glad to hear that  

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Hjemi In reply to KingDanduri [2017-09-30 10:24:18 +0000 UTC]

Awh thankyou!  haha maybe I will I'm glad you find him cute

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