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Published: 2015-03-10 23:40:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 681; Favourites: 61; Downloads: 17
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This is the full version of the comparison image recently posted.Did this on stream. Had the rough draft of this image done like for 6 months, but
I couldn't figure out how I wanted to redesign her till yesterday
She looks betterthan ever though ^^. Enjoy
Midori © Holyniwa; Hanamaru the Maker
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Your picture, is very nice, the coloring and shading are very nice in my opinion, the expression conveys very nice so i know what she is feeling, and its easy to tell what shes feeling. I don't see much really that seems off on the picture, the only things that seem a bit off is her lip coloring seems idk maybe a bit lopsided or uneven, maybe its just me, and her arms seem a little long and a bit uh flat like she doesn't have a bend in them, or uh like how the forearm and and upper arm connect, but that also might just be me again. Well its very well done any how. keep up the good work. ^_^ e.deviantart.net/emoticons/t/t… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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Thank you!
I didn't notice about the arms till now, with a character like this, perhaps a bit more meat on the arm would have made her look her age a bit more.
The lips are a iffy thing. I see what you mean, but her head is little tilted, so
I been torn on that one as well XD
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Well lol i may be iffy on the lips too, you may be correct in it just being the tilt of the head, i find that lips have a tendency to just look off sometimes, even on my pictures even when they are perfectly fine. I honestly didn't find much to critique on your picture because you did a very good job in the consistency of the whole picture, from top to bottom cept for the arm i pointed out everything else had a very nice flow to it. Thank you for taking my critique lol and keep up doing a great job on your art.
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No problem!
Makes me wonder how Myria would look in your improved style.
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Hah, I was going to say "Probably not so different" and then I realized that I haven't
drawn her in like, three years almost XD Wow! Tempted to draw her as we get closer
to summer time. Remind me again later, kinda busy on the plate atm, but definitely
something I want to do!
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Any specific time I Should remind you?
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Hmm... about mid May, just spam me
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But spamming you is one of the last things I'd want to do XD
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