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HopefulDusk — The Forgotten Chronicles Teaser

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Published: 2017-05-25 11:10:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 521; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 0
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"This is what you've all been waiting for! (hopefully), Yes that's right! The first book comes along well and once I have enough votes to determine the frequency of updates, I'll begin to post it! So to get you all in the mood for it, here's a little Teaser of what's to come!"

Huge thank you to Lou1911 who did the artwork for the cover of Book 1! - Original


Chapter 1
Change of Plan

Autumn ran as fast as his legs would carry him towards the smouldering wreck of his home.

"Mum!?... Dad!?" he shouted.

He sweeps his gaze across the still hot embers of burnt timber and smouldering ashes, looking for any sign of life. He felt something twist inside him when he noticed a bloody lump buried under a pile of burning timbers.

"DAD!!" he screamed running over to the buried lump.

He grunted with effort as he tried to move the timbers, pushing, kicking, head-butting to no avail. Tears stung at his eyes, blurring his vision and still he struggled in vain, desperation outweighing reason.

“DAD, DAD, DAAAD!!” he yelled repeatedly.

Then like a knife through his conscious, he suddenly became aware of a whimpering sound behind him. Vision still blurred and pain stabbing at him from the small cuts and burns now littering his body after trying to move the timbers, he turned to face the noise.
Blinking away tears to clear his vision, he yelped. His mother was being held at the point of a sword by someone clad in black armour.

“Please… DON’T!” he pleaded.

Time slowed. He watched on in terrified horror as the black armoured figure drove the sword through his mother. Watched as blood was drawn, her eyes full of tears fixed on him as she gurgled her last words.

“R-…Run!” she said before going limp.

He screamed in rage through his twisted, sorrowful heart and tear filled eyes as he charged towards the figure. The world around him began to fade to black as his vision wavered and swam.


Autumn Night bolted upright drenched in a cold sweat, hoof held out towards the opposite end of his room. He felt a few tears still dripping down his muzzle across the tear streaked rivers they’d already made over his scaled coat. He forced his breathing to settle and wiped his face on the bed sheets just in time to hear a knock on his door, one of the guards.

“Sir?... Is everything alright?” a young mare wearing steel armour entered the room as the door creaked open.
"Yes, everything's fine… Please let Pearl Quiver know that there's something I must discuss with her later today” he replied
“At once Sir!” the mare exclaimed, saluting before leaving the room.

Autumn let out a sigh taking the moment of solace to gather his thoughts as he stared down at the damp sheet in his hooves. After collecting his thoughts and making sure that he wasn’t crying anymore, he pulled himself from his bed heading for the adjoined bathroom.
Turning on the tap he splashed his face with water, sighing gratefully as he felt the dried tears wash away...


The Forgotten Chronicles
BOOK I - COMING SOON!

Vote on the release format here: hopefuldusk.deviantart.com/jou…


Side Note:
If you have any additional questions about or relating to this Teaser, Please send myself a note and I'll answer ASAP.
If you have any questions relating to the artwork, please send a note to Lou1911
Thank You!! 

 

PLEASE DO NOT DUPLICATE If you see anyone claiming to own this Artwork, identical or otherwise, please let myself or Lou1911  know via note! Thank you!

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Comments: 26

existenceinanutshell [2017-05-25 21:11:46 +0000 UTC]

hm, interesting teaser.

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HopefulDusk In reply to existenceinanutshell [2017-05-25 23:59:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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existenceinanutshell In reply to HopefulDusk [2017-05-26 00:10:08 +0000 UTC]

Hope may I please offer you some advice?

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HopefulDusk In reply to existenceinanutshell [2017-05-26 00:18:10 +0000 UTC]

Of course!

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existenceinanutshell In reply to HopefulDusk [2017-05-26 00:29:40 +0000 UTC]

Well, I wanted to tell ya keep each chapter short or cut each chapter into pieces, because what I've noticed with people on DA is that most people won't read long stuff.

I blame our generation for that, but it's the truth unless you at some point post the story on some fanfiction site or something along those lines.

People on DA mostly just want a picture with some information on said scene underneath, or just cut each chapter into 3 acts with 3 pictures with text underneath each picture to explain what's going on.

I just noticed more people tend to read stuff like that, over long stuff on DA.

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HopefulDusk In reply to existenceinanutshell [2017-05-26 00:47:20 +0000 UTC]

I'll see what I can do for my DA audience, but my friends can only lend so much of their time to make illustrations for my novel.

But yes, I have already taken that into account, I appreciate the advice.

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existenceinanutshell In reply to HopefulDusk [2017-05-26 00:56:21 +0000 UTC]

I understand, I am in the same exact situation in many respects Hope, but anyway thank you.

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HopefulDusk In reply to existenceinanutshell [2017-05-26 01:00:09 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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existenceinanutshell In reply to HopefulDusk [2017-05-26 01:02:17 +0000 UTC]

I'm worried about that underlined you lol.

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HopefulDusk In reply to existenceinanutshell [2017-05-26 01:09:41 +0000 UTC]

:/ why? x'D

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existenceinanutshell In reply to HopefulDusk [2017-05-26 01:16:17 +0000 UTC]

Because the moment I saw that I went like "did my advice piss you off?" or is he saying thank you to be nice, or is he saying thank you because he actually means it and because I am one of his friends?

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HopefulDusk In reply to existenceinanutshell [2017-05-26 01:16:58 +0000 UTC]

I mean thank YOU, I don't know why you would thank me. I wasn't the one offering adivce xD

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existenceinanutshell In reply to HopefulDusk [2017-05-26 01:18:34 +0000 UTC]

True but you did listen, I can't tell you how many people on DA tell you to piss off the moment you offer them advice or say they can improve in a certain area if they do, so, and so.

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HopefulDusk In reply to existenceinanutshell [2017-05-26 01:20:13 +0000 UTC]

Well I appreciate comments of all types, if people comment, it means there's interest.

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existenceinanutshell In reply to HopefulDusk [2017-05-26 01:21:52 +0000 UTC]

I just wish everybody saw it that way handsome.

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HopefulDusk In reply to existenceinanutshell [2017-05-26 01:22:30 +0000 UTC]

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existenceinanutshell In reply to HopefulDusk [2017-05-26 01:23:33 +0000 UTC]

 

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tinuleaf [2017-05-25 14:45:13 +0000 UTC]

Sound exciting ! The teaser is very promising and Lou1911 again did a stunning job for the cover

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HopefulDusk In reply to tinuleaf [2017-05-25 16:04:20 +0000 UTC]

Indeed!
I just hope to live up to the expectations of readers!

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BreloomsGarden [2017-05-25 14:04:26 +0000 UTC]

OOOH am excited!! Lou1911 did such a lovely job on this!! I look forward to the actual story.

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HopefulDusk In reply to BreloomsGarden [2017-05-25 14:08:10 +0000 UTC]

I only hope I live up to everyone's expectations.

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BreloomsGarden In reply to HopefulDusk [2017-05-25 14:31:02 +0000 UTC]

You will!

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HopefulDusk In reply to BreloomsGarden [2017-05-25 16:04:43 +0000 UTC]

I hope so!

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XxPixie-BeexX [2017-05-25 11:12:06 +0000 UTC]

Loooks sooooo good!

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HopefulDusk In reply to XxPixie-BeexX [2017-05-25 11:42:05 +0000 UTC]

Well that's just the cover, hopefully the content will be just as interesting to you

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XxPixie-BeexX In reply to HopefulDusk [2017-05-25 12:20:50 +0000 UTC]

Heh yea

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