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Published: 2009-09-16 17:07:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 33596; Favourites: 1330; Downloads: 90
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I'm not sure about this picture.I think anything went wrong in this work and I don't know what.
I like the technical aspect and the idea of this picture but I am not happy with this result....
What do you think about this picture?
Model: Ophelias-Overdose
addition:
Ophelia is the cutest person I know. With this costume and make-up she seems cute and creepy/dangerous in the same time to me.
This pose is inspired from a lurking cat. Still and fixed at the moment (cute), but in the next second the explodes...
Or like catoga
The black and white stripes reminds me on Tim Burtons artworks and that needs striped tentacles
The new versoin in my scraps :
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Well, that's certainly rather different - in a uniquely creepy yet fun kind of way.
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I really like this but there does seem to be something missing from making it excelent. I guess it just doesnt really make sence to me, its like she needs to be looking at some crazy tenticle monster or something xD
Sorry I cant be of much help! Its still very cute ^_^ Then again everything with Ophelia is cute hehe.
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Very much an optical illusion and modernist. The various stripes, balls and different shapes in the background juxtapose and contrast against the attire the model is wearing--and she's very catlike--perhaps reminding one of a cat-in-the-hat type (alluding to the stripped hat that character wore)??
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Interresting picture, but it really reminds of "Beetlejuice" for some reason.
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Beetlejuice was one of my inspirations
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I like it, don't think there's anything wrong with it. It does seem a bit crowded with all the stuff around here, but not disturbing.
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This is a really interesting idea for a picture. Maybe a bit cluttered, but awesome none the less.
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I think that the focus is more on the tentacles there are to many of them or to many of them in the front.
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Thanks for your inspiration
I work on a cleaner version.
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I think that it looks pretty unique and interesting :3 *pokes at tentacles*
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The only thing I don't like about it is that the combination of her makeup and hair seem to make her face almost pixelated in relation to the smoothness of everything else.
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I like the picture, but it is a little cluttered. It was hard for my eyes to focus on one particular thing.
but i like the concept.
nice work
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Thanks
I think that describes best what I don't like in this picture.
I work on an new, more tidy version...
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awesome! I can't wait to see it
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I am not able to critique, but I do like this piece a lot. It's very unique and original, but I must say it reminds me of tentacle hentai... I hope I do not offend by saying so. I also feel that maybe if a bit of color was added it would improve the picture a bit.
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I don't think about hentai on making this picture. My Inspirations comes more from Tim Burton...
The Inspiration for the pose comes from my cat pictures (catoga
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Oh, I had no doubt your inspirations were separate of hentai! But it was one of the things that came to mind :]
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i would write a critique but i dont pay for my deviant art
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It's amazing. I LOVE it! The only thing I would change are her sleeves. They're too loose. If they were tight fitting they'd match the tentacles more.
~Manda
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i love the makeup
think it's a bit confuseing and maybe too much black and white?
lovely work you have
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I try to tidy it up
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I think you could have some larger tentacles in the background to help with depth, and fewer tentacles and balls in the foreground to help from distraction...
.....great shot though, I love her pose and outfit.....
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Dude,AWSOME piece...but dnt u think a Liiitle blood-red lipstick would hav done the trick there? don't knw,jst sayin
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it reminds me a bit of tim burton's charlie and the choclate factory but i really like it and her make up is awesome!
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that is just way too many levels of hot right there, awesome job
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I can see what you mean I think what went wrong is the focus is more on the tenticules then the model o-o
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You needed one more element; even though its very busy/crowded, I think adding an object, maybe even something brightly coloured... like red, that the model could hold or be somehow interacting with... then the tentacles would become more of a background than a main focus;
The pose is off.
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For that kind of pose I think the lip stick would have been better fully painted.if u wanted a sceleton effect, a shocking, scary face would have suited better... in this cat-like pose you are looking too cute to be scary enough for the lip effect... that 's what i see as a little weird about the picture...
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I think the idea is great! But maybe you could play a bit more with the depth of field in this picture. I think it would look great if the tentacles were placed in such a way that you can see them getting sharper towards the subject and then unsharpen again behind the focus point of the subject. Do i make any sense?
cheers!
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It...makes me think about tentacle rape.
Maybe it's that
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