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HourglassHero β Gastone Dynamic Pose
Published: 2010-11-15 20:58:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 2411; Favourites: 43; Downloads: 41
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Another sprite!
This time it is a repose of an older one [link] !
I think i have improved quite a bit, u tell me!
Name: Gastone (from Gust) XD
Gym Type: Flying
PokΓ©mon on hand: Pidgeotto, Noctowl, Pidgeot
Biography/Background/History*: Originally from the Amux region Gastone fell in love with flying type pokemon when he found himself cornered by a group of Mightyena. All of a sudden a lonely Pidgeotto appeared and repelled the predators with its mighty attacks. After that moment Gastone dedicated himslef in training his flying type pokemon to remember that single and unforgettable day. He hosts his gym in a gigantic Aviary, a paradise for flying type pokemon.
Personality: Serious in nature he loves to talk and train his flying partners!
Physical Description*: He is Indian brunette with feathers on the back of his hair and on his brown trousers. He has a rope tied to his belt and a hourglass hanging from his neck(hourglasshero)!
Things you would like them to say before and after battle: "The sky is limitless and so is my power." "I guess even the great sky isn't as great as you!"
Made from scratch by me ~HourglassHero !
Can only be used by ~GavZxHayley for his AWESOME GAME -----> [link] <----- Pokemon Forever Lost!
DO NOT STEAL OR USE WITHOUT PERMISSION!
UPDATE
i made the neck visible and worked a bit on the hand that is holding a pokeball!
UPDATE no2
made the hand holding the pokeball longer by a pixel, made the thighs thinner and cut one pixel from the "standing leg"!
Does it look proportional now?
Plz comment!
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Comments: 11
Sorry, I owed you this comment since your note, haven't been able to get around to it (as with many things > >)
Let's see, my first quirk is the double highlight you put on your hair. I had a period in which all the hair I sprited was a glittery mess of pixels xD It'd be better to remove one of the two highlights
His right sleeve (our right, I mean) seems to be cut diagonally, as if the sleeve is longer on top of the arm than below. You should probably redo that so the sleeve looks even on both sides. You did the other sleeve fine, so do this one like that as well.
Another minor thing, you should perhaps make the armpit a bit more apparent since his side is facing us.
His right shoe (our right, again) is bothering me 
Aside from everything above, this is all I could get from a brief look; I need to get back to studying 
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grazie mille!
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Lol, italian! Β°wΒ° (uahah, google translas, eh?)
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ha ha nope!
i know latin(irrelevant) and i have an uncle who lives in Rome!
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Your uncle?! Ohh, some of my friends as live in Rome *-*.
(latin for nothing! XD I never study this subject, as for greece, ahah)
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Pose is just a knock-out to me, however anathomy isn't so great unluckily. But, you've got a big plus from me, really.
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thanks for the comment!
which part of the anatomy? hands, legs?
if u could tell me i could fix it!
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No problem.
Actually it is pretty difficult imo to describe what is wrong with such a pose - ask Laura, she's specialist, i'm just laic 
The legs are main problem IMO. Primarly - they are too long vide the body, he looks like a giant. If I were you I would cut some pixels from 'em and make 'em shorter. Right leg is also too massive vide left - the thigh is a little too big. And I think that's all I could grumble about...
But, remember it's just mine, subjective opinion, don't take it too seriously.
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i updated it!
what do u think of it now?
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Oh yeah it's better now! And I see you've added also shade on his arm, great.
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