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Published: 2019-04-03 21:29:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 2652; Favourites: 37; Downloads: 2
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prologue : www.deviantart.com/huatay/art/…
First page : fav.me/dcfkxcc
cover : where all starts cover
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Spanish translation :
Al DIA SIQUIENTE ..
Ryo ; no . lo vi en todo el dia asi que supongo estara ocupado ..
Fayna ; oh entiendo .
son unos regalos que hice para ambos , asi para recordarnos a pesar de estar lejos
Ryo : wow , gracias
y no quieres que le de su parte ??
Fayna : no no debo hacerlo yo misma , ademas se enfadaria si no me despido
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I notice there isn't a capital no in the "no no" part and "oh ,, oh" also seperate comas.
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Ehm,, dont worry
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Actually, the mistake is putting a space before the comma (there should only be space after the comma). As for double commas, well, I don't know if she wants to invent a new punctuation sign (like a comma version of the triple dot ... like ,,,
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