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katstories [2016-12-22 00:12:05 +0000 UTC]
Well! That answered a lot of my previous questions about how Don could wrangle out of his word of honor.
Good for them getting rid of the bad guy, even if it was harrowing because they had failed.
If Donnie's soul hadn't listened to the sultry sounds of Raph's voice it would eventually have dissipated in two weeks, leaving Don the Data wannabe forever.
And I think, based on what you wrote, Raph might not of survived it. The promise of one not leaving the other behind could be construed as a little dark given their way of living.
I also think, that although there might be some turtly shenanigans going on shortly, Raph is going to cry his eyes out first and then make some sweet soulful love to Donnie.
Thank you for writing it, and for keeping up the pace. It was great seeing this wrap up in a nice little happy turtle package for the holidays.
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NeatTea [2016-12-19 05:30:18 +0000 UTC]
Such nice ending ^^
Poor Casey, I totally understand his freak out, as much as I want to be in level of boys I know in reality I would be shaking experiencing this soulsucking monster mission, yes yes go cuddle up with April XD
Aww Donny's so adorable, the first thing that came out of him was lighthearted humor, and then back at home he blushed eep! ^^
Mikey got his Leo and Leo Mikey 8D moment he offered to share the room is so him XD Leo is also more playful around him, yes go to Mikes room and don't be shy to make some noise!
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Donatellosgirl36 [2016-12-19 03:24:16 +0000 UTC]
I'm not really into t-cest, but this plot trapped me and dragged me along in the most amazing and breathtaking way. Great job!
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TinyWhiteOwl [2016-12-18 22:58:23 +0000 UTC]
AAAAAH HOLY CRAP THIS IS SO GOOD!!!!!
An amazing ending to an amazing story... holy crap I started crying when Raph was speaking to Dons soul
Fantastic work.. as usual
xx
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Hummerhouse In reply to TinyWhiteOwl [2016-12-19 01:05:00 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! When Raph speaks from the heart, it's enough to bring tears. That big softie.
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TinyWhiteOwl In reply to Hummerhouse [2016-12-19 06:07:55 +0000 UTC]
Oh yeah he is a big softie with loads of muscles
It was seriously a f**king amazing story... my fiancé promised to read it soon as well.. he is going to read Don and the Puzzle Box first though
xx
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