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hush07 — Oath of the Templar p05
Published: 2010-12-21 16:46:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 2705; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 26
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Page five.....WooHoo !!well there you go....Darius, the second templar........and a complete Opposite of Sir Otto....(philosophically)
And this is where the story really starts....
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Oh ooohh! Will there be more? 8D
This was such a great comic!
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Im glad you like it...
well, im working on chapter 3, do know if there will be more after that though..
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That's great, I hope it becomes famous!
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hehe...me too
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THIS COMIC IS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!!!!!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT PAGE!
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Than you so much.....i really appreciate it.
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used to think that templars looked stupid, nice job
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Nice to know that you changed your mind....
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thank you for the kind words...
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The next one! Whohooo!
Yes, our templar Darius standing over the dead darkspawn is definitely the best part of this comic. I like the simplified and still detailed look of his armor and the shading of his "skirt". And those last profile panels of him and Otto are also well done (good dialog). Especially the templar helmet looks good.
And about the typos. Those are annoying but we all have them every now and then and those cannot be totally avoided. With names those "come out" even more but I see you fixed them already.
Good work.
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Thanks.....i like giving detail, but not so much that it draws attention in the wrong places....
hopefully the pages will keep improving....and it might be a while till the next one....
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Wow! Beautiful artwork. The panel with Darius standing over the dead darkspawn is just awesome!
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Thank you.....I do what i can...
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First... It's spelled Malificar
Second... It's spelled Andraste
Third... Wynne should be capitalized
It's good, but those mistakes are glaring in that it makes you look like you never played the game.
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Typos ?!....seriously ?!...fine.....ill fix it....
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