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Here is the pg 5. I like this pg the best so far!!

'The voice continued with a sinister tone: " Once you choose one, you will loose the other forever." Bolt stood there in silence as conflicting, strong feelings dwell inside of him. It seemed as if he was thinking so hard that he was unable to do anything else at the moment. The burning feelings of rage and desperate were taking over but Bolt kept his cool and tried to concentrate. He knew that acting mindlessly would lead to making the situation worse for himself. "Well," the voice teased, " What are you going to do, Bolt the super dog?"
Mittens sat in the rain beside Bolt. She was watching over him and tried to keep him as comfortable as possible. Suddenly she heard Bolt whining quietly."Bolt?" she said with spark of hope now warming her heart. Bolt went quiet again. Mittens put her ear against his chest to check if he was okay. Her eyes widened. She tried to hear his heart beat and put her ear even closer to him. She heard nothing. His heart had stopped.
"I have made my decision," Bolt said firmly not knowing which way exactly to project his voice. Yet he knew that this mysterious person was able to hear him. "I choose... both"
"Please...please wake up Bolt! Bolt!" Mittens kept crying and tried to shake Bolt. His body was loose and he didn't answer her or open his eyes. "It can't...it can't be. Bolt.. you can't leave me!" The rain drops blended to her tears that were now falling from her eyes. She had stopped yelling. Mittens lay down beside Bolt. She cuddled very close to him and whispered: "Bolt... I... I love you. Please... don't go.I'll do anything..."

:3 {3 again, my scanner sorta cut parts of this... but this time I was prepared and made sure i centered things more. Because it always cuts the edges. Anyways, hope u like it and this is gonna continue!

Description
Here is the pg 5. I like this pg the best so far!!

'The voice continued with a sinister tone: " Once you choose one, you will loose the other forever." Bolt stood there in silence as conflicting, strong feelings dwell inside of him. It seemed as if he was thinking so hard that he was unable to do anything else at the moment. The burning feelings of rage and desperate were taking over but Bolt kept his cool and tried to concentrate. He knew that acting mindlessly would lead to making the situation worse for himself. "Well," the voice teased, " What are you going to do, Bolt the super dog?"
Mittens sat in the rain beside Bolt. She was watching over him and tried to keep him as comfortable as possible. Suddenly she heard Bolt whining quietly."Bolt?" she said with spark of hope now warming her heart. Bolt went quiet again. Mittens put her ear against his chest to check if he was okay. Her eyes widened. She tried to hear his heart beat and put her ear even closer to him. She heard nothing. His heart had stopped.
"I have made my decision," Bolt said firmly not knowing which way exactly to project his voice. Yet he knew that this mysterious person was able to hear him. "I choose... both"
"Please...please wake up Bolt! Bolt!" Mittens kept crying and tried to shake Bolt. His body was loose and he didn't answer her or open his eyes. "It can't...it can't be. Bolt.. you can't leave me!" The rain drops blended to her tears that were now falling from her eyes. She had stopped yelling. Mittens lay down beside Bolt. She cuddled very close to him and whispered: "Bolt... I... I love you. Please... don't go.I'll do anything..."

:3 {3 again, my scanner sorta cut parts of this... but this time I was prepared and made sure i centered things more. Because it always cuts the edges. Anyways, hope u like it and this is gonna continue!