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Just gonna upload a few of my fantrolls. I'd love critiques?

Race: Troll
Name: Jaenus Bifron
Gender: Male
Associated color: Rust red #A82501 (a little more orange than Aradia)
Associated item: glass
Theme: Past and future, choices
Job asperitions: Historet (A sort of epic poet/historian blend)
Symbol: <->
Chum/Trollhandle: tragicChronicler
Typing quirk: He speaks in the third person, though will sometimes use quotes instead as if narrating a story. He has perfect spelling and syntax and always uses complete sentences. He uses <> instead of () and likes using ~. He will use ~ instead of - and to extend punctuation. He also uses ~~~ instead of... (EG. He thinks that is wonderful~~~~! But then again~~~) Emotes are ;~; >~< *~* and ^~^.
Title: Seer of Time
Strife specibus: Mirrorkind (uses enchanted mirrors that can reflect attacks)
Moon: Prospit
Player planet: Land of Infinity and Legend
Cruxite artifact: Looking glass
Fetch modus: Story- Each captchalogued item is given part of a story scenario printed on the back of the card. In order to take the items out, he must combine two cards whos sentences make a story plot idea or trope that is deemed sensable and interersting enough by the sylladex.
Guardian: Snakedad (an amphisbaena, a snake with a head at either end)
Skills/ abilities: Can see ghosts from the past and sometmes the future. They can't touch him though, and he mostly can't hear them.
Appearance: Horns resemble a jester's hat and his hair is slicked back. He always wears a mask obscuring his whole face for undisclosed reasons. His normal mask is half dark grey and half white. The white side has a happy smile and the dark side has a sad frown. The eyes are closed on both sides. Wears harem pants in his blood color tucked into knee high black boots. He wears a turtleneck with a simple vest on top (in his moirail's blood color?). He often wears black gloves as well.
About: Jaenus is a very whimsical and easygoing troll. One of his favourite things to do is tell stories, sometimes even in song with his guitar as acompanyment. It is often hard to tell if his stories are real, fictional, or somewhere in-between. He also loves reading books of many kinds including science fiction, historical novels, troll shakespere, and poetry. He is almost never without his mask. He is kind of mysterious and reclusive and doesn't like getting directly involved in anything. He also doesn't like talking about himself. His snakedad is typically happy just watching him while coiled around his neck or arms.

Notes: Not entirely sure how I feel about his job, I totally forget what I meant for his land to be like, I'm not sure about his ability, and I want to add a description for his hive still.

Description
Just gonna upload a few of my fantrolls. I'd love critiques?

Race: Troll
Name: Jaenus Bifron
Gender: Male
Associated color: Rust red #A82501 (a little more orange than Aradia)
Associated item: glass
Theme: Past and future, choices
Job asperitions: Historet (A sort of epic poet/historian blend)
Symbol: <->
Chum/Trollhandle: tragicChronicler
Typing quirk: He speaks in the third person, though will sometimes use quotes instead as if narrating a story. He has perfect spelling and syntax and always uses complete sentences. He uses <> instead of () and likes using ~. He will use ~ instead of - and to extend punctuation. He also uses ~~~ instead of... (EG. He thinks that is wonderful~~~~! But then again~~~) Emotes are ;~; >~< *~* and ^~^.
Title: Seer of Time
Strife specibus: Mirrorkind (uses enchanted mirrors that can reflect attacks)
Moon: Prospit
Player planet: Land of Infinity and Legend
Cruxite artifact: Looking glass
Fetch modus: Story- Each captchalogued item is given part of a story scenario printed on the back of the card. In order to take the items out, he must combine two cards whos sentences make a story plot idea or trope that is deemed sensable and interersting enough by the sylladex.
Guardian: Snakedad (an amphisbaena, a snake with a head at either end)
Skills/ abilities: Can see ghosts from the past and sometmes the future. They can't touch him though, and he mostly can't hear them.
Appearance: Horns resemble a jester's hat and his hair is slicked back. He always wears a mask obscuring his whole face for undisclosed reasons. His normal mask is half dark grey and half white. The white side has a happy smile and the dark side has a sad frown. The eyes are closed on both sides. Wears harem pants in his blood color tucked into knee high black boots. He wears a turtleneck with a simple vest on top (in his moirail's blood color?). He often wears black gloves as well.
About: Jaenus is a very whimsical and easygoing troll. One of his favourite things to do is tell stories, sometimes even in song with his guitar as acompanyment. It is often hard to tell if his stories are real, fictional, or somewhere in-between. He also loves reading books of many kinds including science fiction, historical novels, troll shakespere, and poetry. He is almost never without his mask. He is kind of mysterious and reclusive and doesn't like getting directly involved in anything. He also doesn't like talking about himself. His snakedad is typically happy just watching him while coiled around his neck or arms.

Notes: Not entirely sure how I feel about his job, I totally forget what I meant for his land to be like, I'm not sure about his ability, and I want to add a description for his hive still.