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HyperChronic — A Disturbed Child

Published: 2013-01-13 01:40:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 3057; Favourites: 33; Downloads: 0
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Description Something I whupped up to practice on shading (I'M COLORING IN A NEW COMIC PAGE!!!!! Well, I'm done, but I'm redoing the shading so..... YAH)

Not my best, but I like how it turned out.

Hope you guys like it!

Artz (C) =HyperChronic
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Comments: 21

Samira-Eos [2013-02-18 23:31:16 +0000 UTC]

She's kinda cute
Love it.

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Loki-oKada [2013-02-18 22:43:03 +0000 UTC]

great work))

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RobertDanielRyan [2013-02-18 19:51:12 +0000 UTC]

Nice DeviantArt! Thanks~ Robert Ryan

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FILTrandez [2013-01-28 16:50:19 +0000 UTC]

So dark...yet so cute...<3

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CreatorAllanvre [2013-01-27 19:40:38 +0000 UTC]

that teddy bear had it comin'!

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saysoifyouwantto [2013-01-27 07:31:18 +0000 UTC]

bear((

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LightrayPhotography [2013-01-26 19:48:14 +0000 UTC]

She seems so alone. I wish you hadn't have centered her. She'd look more isolated if she was actually in the corner and the image was a little more off center and zooomed out.

I really enjoy the wounded bear.

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HyperChronic In reply to LightrayPhotography [2013-01-30 21:27:59 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry, but that sort of confused me. (I'm really sorry!) First you said she looks so alone, but then you suggested ideas that would help her to look more isolated/ alone. I LOVE your suggestion, and that does sound a lot better. But I'm confused; you wanted her to look more isolated, however you said she looks alone already. (I don't mean to sound harsh, I'm sincerely abashed.)

Thank you!

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LightrayPhotography In reply to HyperChronic [2013-01-31 02:13:15 +0000 UTC]

Sure. I'll give you a comparison. If I draw a person faced down in the mud. He might look dead. If I have him face down in a pool of blood, he looks much more dead.

Against your concept: if your concept was to make her alone x,y,z will improve the image's balance, tension, and give it an all around more interesting feel.

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HyperChronic In reply to LightrayPhotography [2013-01-31 02:41:13 +0000 UTC]

I understand. I'm sorry if I angered you in anyway.

I was stupid to be confused. I'll try harder next time when I do a practice drawing again.

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LightrayPhotography In reply to HyperChronic [2013-01-31 03:30:08 +0000 UTC]

lol what? I don't think you're stupid, and I don't think I'm offended. I was just giving a mini critique about some art I liked!

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HyperChronic In reply to LightrayPhotography [2013-01-31 03:32:35 +0000 UTC]

Oh! I was freaking out for a little. I thought I made you mad or something. Thank you for your critique, I really appreciate your feedback.

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SkylaComics [2013-01-26 10:00:24 +0000 UTC]

Oh dear Poor teddy bear. I like how you shaded this Great work!

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Cristatella [2013-01-26 01:52:42 +0000 UTC]

Poor teddy bear.
That girl disturbs me now...

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DesertFoxKatbox [2013-01-25 19:03:14 +0000 UTC]

Im sure she was just playing :/

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RichiHart [2013-01-25 12:23:10 +0000 UTC]

Oh, poor one!

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Thegarfieldtouch [2013-01-24 23:44:05 +0000 UTC]

well thank god i dont have a daughter like that i the near future! lol great job on the shadings!

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roamingtigress [2013-01-24 20:48:06 +0000 UTC]

The shading and colouring here are great! I love the emotion here as well.

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S3rb4n [2013-01-14 07:50:30 +0000 UTC]

Cool shading. Good job!

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Madeau [2013-01-13 10:26:27 +0000 UTC]

awesome!! You did the shading really well

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GirlyRainbowVampire [2013-01-13 01:41:31 +0000 UTC]

This just looks awesome!!!
Really great work

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