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PrayerGirl1 [2011-07-07 04:43:19 +0000 UTC]
AWWW!! I love this!! If they end up going to the ball Mortimer should be the prince and he wants to dance with Minne, but Mickey then finds a reasonto stay and become her dance partner! XD Have I told you how much I love this and you!!?
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Elera [2011-05-23 16:06:12 +0000 UTC]
So I totally read this one and then forgot to comment, because I originally read it on my phone, and making comments on deviantArt on your mobile device SUCKS. But anyway.
This one was so sweeeeet. I love the simplicity of it, the description of how gorgeous Minnie looks in her gown, how she's immediately attracted to him, how they just don't want to let go of one another during the dance, just - just uuugh, all of it. This is why I usually like to comment as I'm reading, because otherwise I forget all the wonderful, finer points. But those were the things that stuck out to me the most. I just remember sighing dreamily in the cafeteria as I was reading it. I would love to think that Mickey ends up being Minnie's dance partner at the ball, or that he eventually whisks her away and becomes her magical husband. THAT WOULD MAKE MY LIFE. Much like this story.
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hypermegatailsfan In reply to Elera [2011-05-23 16:22:11 +0000 UTC]
I kinda hated how simple I made it, but if you like it, then it's all good. I wanted to make one of those rare 'Minnie goes after Mickey' stories, because the world needs 'em. I'm still not sure how to end it, I just wanna make it different than the usual cinderella endings, but I do like your suggestions, especially MAGICAL HUSBAND. that has a wonderful ring to it.
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Lishyp In reply to hypermegatailsfan [2015-08-29 05:32:47 +0000 UTC]
I love how this story went, turning the Cinderella story around! I agree that Mortimer should be the prince and when he spots Minnie he insists on making her his bride even though she doesn't want to, so when she escapes the ball from his evil clutches Mortimer tries to track her down!
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Seiyaku [2011-05-19 21:18:20 +0000 UTC]
I am grinning like an absolute moron and it's ALL YOUR FAULT T:<
I really do adore subversions in fairy tales! They're just always so fun and interesting~
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WarriorRainbow [2011-05-17 21:17:33 +0000 UTC]
There's a very stupid grin on my face. XD
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LarkOfTheSky [2011-05-15 22:53:03 +0000 UTC]
This was wonderful, everything about it! I love the fact that instead of Prince Charming, Minnie fell in love with her Godfather. And I'll admit, all the parts where Minnie was the one to flirt with Mickey was hilariously cute. Great job!
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LarkOfTheSky In reply to hypermegatailsfan [2011-05-20 23:46:20 +0000 UTC]
Those are some of the most entertaining versions of Fairy Tales, one that don't follow the plot at all, or at least take a wild turn from it. I would be really interested if you were to write a 'reversed' Snow White version with the mice pair. (Or anything with them really.) I love it when they show that side of Minnie, totally confident and aware of her cutsie-ness.And of course whenever Mickey reacts to it is absolutely hilarious. xD
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LarkOfTheSky In reply to hypermegatailsfan [2011-05-24 00:36:25 +0000 UTC]
Haha, don't worry about it! Has happened to me to may times to count. xD
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hypermegatailsfan In reply to LarkOfTheSky [2011-05-21 00:12:54 +0000 UTC]
I actually do have an idea for a 'reversed' Snow White, where Mickey is the leader of the dwarfs, and he and Snow White/Minnie fall in love. But it still needs some work, so it'll take a while before I can write any bits from it.
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