Comments: 26
DelDiz [2011-07-17 02:05:19 +0000 UTC]
One of the most emotionally Mickey and Minnie fanfics I've ever read. I wish you'd write out the entire story. The synopsis is fantastic.
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ChristianCosmo [2011-06-07 23:36:53 +0000 UTC]
This is Awesome!
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AquaMajica [2011-06-07 22:05:18 +0000 UTC]
this is the second one I've read and the second one I liked..... Maybe I should read the others too.
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PrayerGirl1 [2011-06-07 21:33:53 +0000 UTC]
OMG!! You are so awesome!! This was wonderful, once again!!
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cici-chi [2011-06-06 23:44:53 +0000 UTC]
This. After the day I had at work this brought much needed happiness. I cant even begin to describe everything I love in this but I'm gonna try.
I love that at the beginning Mickey is still willing to let Mortimer go, not only cause he has much more pressing matters at hand (burning building and most of all his beloved is in mortal danger) but because it's the right thing to do, Mickey adheres to his rule of never taking a life. Which is why when he goes berserk it makes it all the more scarier. He's lost the most important person in his life, he never got to tell her how he felt, to truly be with her. He's numb to everything around him. He's not thinking, he's raging, hurting and will stop at nothing to be rid of the cause of it, to make him pay. Unfortunately for Morty he's the prime target and suffers a most violent attack from Mickey. My heart dropped as well when Minnie fell through the floor, even though I knew she'd ultimately be ok but the way you described it, how the only warning was her scream, then the beams falling in after her and then silence it just hurts a bit and that's what makes you an excellent story teller darling, that you can make us feel what Mickey feels.
I also like that you jumped to Ludwig and Gyro (GYRO!!! ) and we got to see the people "behind the scenes" so to speak and how they work. The description of the hidden monitors was pretty sweet and you cant really get a feel of the seriousness of the situation with how Gyro wont look up at the monitors, so busy he is in stopping the hackers and Ludwig's struggle to find Minnie and both of their absolute horrors at seeing what Mickey is about to do. It's a very good thing Ludwig found Minnie and was able to tell Mickey when he did or else Mick could have had blood on his hands, and despite if Minnie had died I don't thin Mickey would have been able to forgive himself for taking Morty life either.
But what really gets me, what really just made me sigh is sheer happiness was the reunion between them. When he gave no thought to himself and jumped down the hole to get to her, how he holds her in such a loving embrace, glad that she is ok (and probably vowing to never let her out of his site again), how she recognizing it's him even though she also doesn't in her fatigue through his eyes (eyes are the windows to one's soul after all and I love that it keeps coming back to her recognizing his eyes) and that the kiss is the only thing they need. and then you wrote that line and I was done, down for the count as a puddle of mush. and then you didn't stop it just there, you went and added that chilling scene with Jonathan and it just hints at things to come and leaves me hanging at the edge of my seat. Good lord girl but you are just amazing and I hope you know that. Man I just....thank you so much for taking my request. You've made my day, you always make my day.
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hypermegatailsfan In reply to cici-chi [2011-06-06 23:56:19 +0000 UTC]
A-aw shucks, such a short writing doesn't deserve such a huge comment. I'm sorry to hear you had a bad day at work, and I hope the rest of your day fares better.
I'm glad to hear you could go through such a range of emotions, I was worried that the pacing made it too quick. As for Ludwig and Gyro, they'll have plenty of scenes in the future, as they are not only the behind-the-scenes folk, but kind of psudeo fathers/big brothers to Mickey, trying to keep him out of danger he can't handle and helping him when he needs it. So not only did they fear for Mortimer's life in that moment, but they also were watching 'their own kid', in a sense, ready to do the unspeakable and that can be terrifying to any familial relationship, seeing someone you helped raise turn into something that awful. Gyro's probably the big brother figure and Ludwig's probably the father figure, due to the age factors.
Mickey of this verse doesn't go a lot of thinking ahead, he's the kind of guy who just dives into the first that comes to mind. As for Minnie's recognition, I'll spoil it for you, since you already know how it ends- Minnie thought she saw those eyes as 'Mickey the paperboy', ho ho ho
Man, I need to do a profile of my Disney OCs one day, they're too fun to make. Jonathan is such a pleasantly evil bastard... I'll have to elaborate on him eventually.
You're very welcome, and thank you for requesting it! Knowing I've made you happy is enough to send me to cloud 9.
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LadyOfOnyx [2011-06-06 19:53:28 +0000 UTC]
Mickey Rage is the best kind of rage. Just sayin'. ;D
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bobtheenchantedone [2011-06-06 18:56:26 +0000 UTC]
This wasn't one of my favorite universes, but I think it is now. Oh the rage of Mickey Mouse when his girl is in danger. But OH NOES THEY KNOW ABOUT HIS WEAKNESS!!
Off to read your other new bit. I love it when you update!
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hypermegatailsfan In reply to bobtheenchantedone [2011-06-06 19:02:14 +0000 UTC]
Glad I could change your mind? XD Ah no worries, of course nobody can like them all, enjoy what you enjoy.
Thanks much~!
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