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TheEnchantedDeviant [2019-01-14 03:55:04 +0000 UTC]
I truly believe that this should be one of the storybits to become a story of its own.
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Lishyp [2015-08-26 03:26:42 +0000 UTC]
I imagine in the end of this story, mer-minnie gets her legs, elopes with Mickey, set sail on his ship and lives happily ever after!
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lonelynightrain [2015-04-14 03:11:03 +0000 UTC]
OOOOo this story is so gorgeous.
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jesuslilprincess [2014-09-11 14:48:38 +0000 UTC]
This is absolutely beautiful! I love it! I was wondering, is this the same captain mickey as the one in pirates vs privates? Obviously Minnie is different, but micks a pirate captain in both, so I was wondering if you intended them to be the same? He seems different in this one, less bold and more timid and shy.
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hypermegatailsfan In reply to jesuslilprincess [2014-09-11 17:46:45 +0000 UTC]
Nope - unless I state otherwise, all of my pirate mickeys are from different stories, thus different worlds. this is a different captain mickey.
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SeXyPrInCeSsS96 [2012-03-31 04:36:09 +0000 UTC]
is minnie topless in the story??
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Stitchpunk9 In reply to hypermegatailsfan [2013-08-03 01:13:55 +0000 UTC]
Despite her being topless a lot of the time. Ever notice that?
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totalexistancefail [2011-07-01 03:17:42 +0000 UTC]
Oh my goodness. Holy Hera. I squealed when I read this, and I shall have you know, I absolutely do not never ever EVER (upon pain of death) squeal. This was so precious and amazing and... oh dear. I am at total loss for words. I don't even like Mickey and Minnie all that much... you may have just changed my heart. I love mermaids. Oh goodness. I think I need to sit down...
At any rate, bravo! This was lovely, and the way you write is superb! I am so in love with this... Please oh please oh please say there will be more?
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hypermegatailsfan In reply to totalexistancefail [2011-07-01 03:20:33 +0000 UTC]
Awwww, shucks. I'm glad to have changed you so much! XD This is really very flattering, and it makes me happy.
There will definitely be more in the future because my friends are silly and demand silly things.
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MythAreReal [2011-06-30 02:13:48 +0000 UTC]
Bravo. This has to be the best story I have ever read. I will tell you this. It made me cry. Well done!
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MythAreReal In reply to hypermegatailsfan [2011-09-20 01:23:57 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for the reply. Hope to read and look of your work.
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MythAreReal [2011-06-30 02:11:34 +0000 UTC]
This storybit is the best one you've done. The way you wrote it made tears come out of my eyes. The love this mouse and mermaid have can never be broken. Well done. Bravo. Bravo.
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PrayerGirl1 [2011-06-29 03:59:18 +0000 UTC]
AWWW!! I love you and your stories so much!!!!
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horngodess39 [2011-06-29 00:24:56 +0000 UTC]
oh my goodness. This is fantastic! You write so wonderfully! I love this idea. Is there more of this somewhere?
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hypermegatailsfan In reply to horngodess39 [2011-06-29 00:37:59 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much!
I have written more small scenes of this in Disney Storybits 59 and 60.
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Skellington13Rose [2011-06-29 00:24:23 +0000 UTC]
.....why in the name of Hell are there no comments yet on this awesome piece of literature?
.... Oh well.
THIS.IS. AWESOME. O_O SERIOUSLY. It was just so sweet and caring and I really got the emotion from this and it was awesome! I hope you continue with these two ^^
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