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bluetita [2022-01-28 07:12:50 +0000 UTC]
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HannajimaShields [2013-09-15 21:00:01 +0000 UTC]
This is amazing and didnt see that coming its amazing!
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REMMI-CHAN [2012-04-09 23:22:54 +0000 UTC]
that was such an awesome ending! did minnie die?
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hypermegatailsfan In reply to TimberlineWolf [2012-04-08 12:38:02 +0000 UTC]
I actually am working on a sequel/prequel! it's called Her Haunted Mansion : Emily's Journey, and the first chapter is already up.
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TimberlineWolf In reply to hypermegatailsfan [2012-04-08 13:45:24 +0000 UTC]
actually that's what made me this in the first place XD
and while i'm enjoying and anticipating thats well, i had something slightly different in mind
having a sequel/not prequel, where we see what Minnie does with her new life, or death as the case might be
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MythAreReal [2012-04-07 19:37:32 +0000 UTC]
Bravo Bravo!!! I love the story. As a romantic, I found this story breath taking. It sent shivers down my spine. Keep up this amazing talent!
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SunflowersXViolets12 [2012-04-07 02:33:47 +0000 UTC]
This...is...awesome!! I felt chills when I read this. Especially when the mother found Minnie dead. She gave her life to Mickey... X33 My goodness, I love this story! XD
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meowmeowkitty4 [2012-03-28 14:27:15 +0000 UTC]
they were all probably spirits/souls and when Mickey invited Minnie, he didn't invite HER, he invited her SOUL. And when she excepted she became free. Free from everything and everybody. That's what I think the story sums up to. By the way, I loved it!!! Good job!
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ChristianCosmo [2012-03-28 02:58:57 +0000 UTC]
Wow... O-O . Okay wow, so when she went she died?
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Kurenai-Hio [2012-03-28 01:55:53 +0000 UTC]
Holy cracker bananas....
This story had me tangled in the words from the get-go.
I am just utterly speechless, shocked, awed and a little sad that the story had to end.
The ending....oh, the ending is so beautiful, yet enticing to one with an imagination. Though, I could not have imagined that little twist on the end, I was tearing up over on my side here.
This story? A-maz-ing.
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minnielovesmickey [2011-08-22 23:23:57 +0000 UTC]
i guess she went to live with mickey then and her parents wont know she is alive up with him
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PrayerGirl1 [2011-07-04 03:23:27 +0000 UTC]
So amazing!!!
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tintin190 [2011-04-30 05:16:10 +0000 UTC]
woah, cool and creepy, romantic, funny and disturbing. I love it X)
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palmsj [2011-04-26 00:57:05 +0000 UTC]
Wow. Just... wow. That was simply amazing. I can sincerely say that that was one of the best fanfictions I have ever read... for any pairings or subjects. The way you described everything with detail, and left a lot of things hanging, simple amazing. And of course I cannot leave out my favourite part, the ending. When you repeated the invitation, it was simply a magnificent ending to an even more magnificent story. I simply cannot wait for more stories like these with Mickey and Minnie.
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hypermegatailsfan In reply to palmsj [2011-04-26 01:07:41 +0000 UTC]
Aw, a comment like that'll make me blush! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I was a little worried about ending it like that, but I still wanted to do it... so i'm glad you liked that too! Thanks a lot for all the kind words!
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WarriorRainbow [2011-04-21 21:52:25 +0000 UTC]
The story is both interesting and disturbing.
I feel that it is not clear who is good here and who is bad.
Her parents are terrible, yet they're still her parents. And Mickey as her "saviour" makes me feel that something is wrong. He's got some demonic overtone in himself. On one hand, he acts as a normal person - not too serious and showing normal emotions unlike her parents ( quote "I dunno how ya stand it, I'd go nuts") - he is kind to other people, arrive when they need help, have visible feeling for Minnie. But on the other hand, when he asked her to stay with him in the mansion, it sounded much more like making a deal than proposal (to say so). Making a choice with no possibility of quiting it, a some kind of pact. With someone who you don't even know well, but you can't resist that person. Each time before he acted in the way - something for something, granting your wish for doing something.
And everytime he arrived with invitation to people, they were on the verge of death. Question : were they dying when he came, or else they died because he came?
Minnie met the raven in her grandfather's garden. It makes me wonder if Mickey hat any connections to him. It's as if her parents were trying to somehow 'protect' her (in a very twisted way) from someone. Her illness could be just a coincidence, but what if not? And there is no doctor mentioned (if I'm correct), only her parents say so. But she acts and feels (in my opinion) as someone having tuberculosis.
Minnie is in fact the one who starts the whole series of events - she summons Mickey by saing "I'd rather die outside than be sick in here a million years!". (Later it turns out that she really dies.) So he comes to her and makes her curious. She must come to him first and then he gives her invitation, a second option - that she doesn't have to spent the rest of her life closed in her room.
She tries to talk to her parents the final time. And they crush her hope and leave her locked in her room. Maybe they tried to stop her from going to that man, maybe they knew something she didn't? Maybe this's a crazy idea what I say, but there is so little information here that everything is possible.
Mickey sends her another invitaion. She accepts. Inside the carriage he tells her to sleep - and she does so. Some magic?
And when she is inside the mansion, Mickey leaves for some time, without really saying why, so she can get to know others. She befriends them or they befriend her? Difficult to say, but again it seems to be a part of the plan. Now she has one more reason to stay.
And finally her father appears. And this final confrontation helps her to make decision. Before her are two worlds, two way so different - and she choses the one she thinks is better for her. Before the appearance of her father she wasn't decided. Now she is.
So it can be said that Mickey won - he's got what he wanted.
Maybe I overimaginated things Maybe the things that are left unsaid make this story more interesting.
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hypermegatailsfan In reply to WarriorRainbow [2011-04-21 22:04:09 +0000 UTC]
... Holy shit. This may be one of the biggest/longest/best comments a work of mine has ever gotten. I'm not quite sure I deserved this. Let me just tell you I am deeply flattered by all the thought you put into this, I am greatly honored.
However, in regards to all of your great questions... I simply can't say. I wrote it this way so readers could interpret these events in whatever way they pleased. Good, evil, what Mickey is, what exactly happened, it's all up to you and however you see it. It's like the Haunted Mansion/Tower Of Terror in the disney parks... we are given glimpses into the 'lives' of the spirits there, but never given their full stories.
Thank you very much for this simply amazing comment, I wish I'd actually done something to deserve it!
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WarriorRainbow In reply to hypermegatailsfan [2011-04-22 22:01:49 +0000 UTC]
Yes, the musicals - and let's admit, almost everything - can be used to get inspiration.
Thank's too!
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JrocksAnime [2011-04-20 05:16:29 +0000 UTC]
Cool! and creepy. It's even more chilling because of the fact that it's never explained exactly what they, the ones at the mansion, are. My guess is some odd form of a ghost/demon hybrid.
You should write more full length stories. I'd definitely read them.
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