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Colorfulmoongato [2014-11-05 04:27:35 +0000 UTC]
I had a hunch it was Jack and Sally -^^-
And Mickey you sly dog, gettin all hot and bothered with Miss Take Charge Minnie lol
Lovely story!! Enjoyed it immensely!!
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PockyLovers27 [2014-10-21 22:56:21 +0000 UTC]
I FIGURED OUT WHO PUMPMIN AND GOURD WERE I FEEL SO CLEVER.
Love this story! Managing to fit a whole story into only three chapters can't be easy (in my opinion). I find Mickey liking Minnie being "in charge" way too amusing. XD
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silverheartlugia2000 [2014-10-21 20:52:46 +0000 UTC]
i knew it was them! but holy cow i didnt expect that twist! awsome story girl!
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Stitchpunk9 [2014-10-21 08:07:57 +0000 UTC]
Pretty great story, Mel. Liked that it came out good. Although, I would've preferred something a little more action packed, like Mickey having to reach some relic that could imprison the king. But hey-ho. It was still good. I enjoyed it all the same and what a good final twist too. Really enjoyed that. Can't wait to see what's coming for Christmas and beyond that.
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Stitchpunk9 In reply to hypermegatailsfan [2014-10-21 12:59:02 +0000 UTC]
True. Still, it's not violent. It's just more suspenseful. So have you got another little story bit planned for release on the 31st? And how goes the Nutcracker story?
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hypermegatailsfan In reply to Stitchpunk9 [2014-10-21 13:11:26 +0000 UTC]
No, this is it for Halloween. I'll be starting the Nutcracker next month.
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Stitchpunk9 In reply to hypermegatailsfan [2014-10-21 13:17:29 +0000 UTC]
Oh, that reminds me. Did you watch the link I sent you to give you some ideas?
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ClarktoonCrossing [2014-10-21 01:14:18 +0000 UTC]
xD I knew it! I knew there couldn't be a Disney Halloween tale without the Pumpkin King himself! Nicely done hyper, the story captured the charm and fright of the original show. Almost makes me wonder what you'll come up with next year...
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ChristianCosmo [2014-10-21 00:59:44 +0000 UTC]
XD I loved the Pharaoh part, Mickey and him mentally slapping himself. Priceless.
Great Halloween story you nail it every time.
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