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hypermegatailsfan In reply to C-Puff [2014-11-03 16:43:15 +0000 UTC]
Aw, thanks so much! But don't get fired for fanfiction, that'll be terrible on your resume! XD And don't worry about taking so long when it comes to reading, this little thing isn't going anywhere.
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Cali-frinzi [2013-02-01 02:32:53 +0000 UTC]
Mickey begins to fall for Minnie because of her smile is a lot better instead the love at first sight way
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bluetita [2012-12-02 02:31:44 +0000 UTC]
hahahah!! poor mickey! XD
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Cimorine90 [2012-03-15 06:58:52 +0000 UTC]
HHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! SOOOO CUUUTE!!!! man, I was right, I KNEW I'd like this story!
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starsailor5 [2011-09-18 13:51:57 +0000 UTC]
cool, so the song is real then Cool.
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NIGHTLYTHEWOLF [2011-07-08 17:41:39 +0000 UTC]
mickey you fool you really think youre going to get past those bars?!XD awesome story too.
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PrayerGirl1 [2011-07-08 04:54:31 +0000 UTC]
Sweet!!
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SonicHearts [2011-06-25 07:26:03 +0000 UTC]
I think I laughed at Mickey running into the bars more that I should have. That was too perfect XD
I can never get over how much I love the pace you set in your stories. Especially the mice's relationship. They, at least mainly Mickey for the current moment, knows there's something tugging there, and there's no denying it no matter how much they.... well, deny it!
Reading how compassionate he can be, like when he wanted to hug her, personally tugged at my heart strings. Because that's really a touching trait, to have someone who'll just comfort you because you need it, even when you say you're okay.
And I just love how you shows a true perspective of how their emotions stir inside them. Not a short cut, but actual connections to each thought and experiences that show why they're feeling that way. I think it's one of my most favorite things about your writing <3 And how Mickey still sounds so... Mickey, even with pirate talk XD Which is amazingly done, btw~
I tend to believe words can be a form of action. Because you're taking the action of using them(if that makes any sense.) Which was how I saw it when he asked her what she wanted and what an impact it made. You never think of such things to such questions until they're directed at you. And I just love how you did it. And gosh darn it Minnie, sometimes the right thing isn't always the right thing! Stand up for what you want! TAKE YOUR PIRATE MAN AND FLY INTO THE SUNSET.
I want to hug Millie. She's too adorable for her own good. And I can't wait to see the reveal of her mystery man~ ;D
Hawkins.... heeeeeeeeeeeeee~
I could go on and on forever how much I love your writings of mice fluff moments~ How he was smitten from her smile, them singing together, how he actually knew how a man is meant to purpose should go,(the facts that he KNOWS just seems so special and tells things about him~) just everything! It all makes my heart flutter, makes me smile, and inspires so much~
As always, I patiently await until I see in my messages you have posted more, in which, I will squee with glee~
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hypermegatailsfan In reply to SonicHearts [2011-06-25 11:36:28 +0000 UTC]
Good golly miss molly, I do not deserve a comment this huge and lovely.
Knowing that the like the pace and Mickey's dialogue is a good comfort. The former because I tend to worry that I take things too fast, and the latter because I see my friends write his dialect and hnnnnngh so much better than me. although I will bit the awful grammar and spelling is killing the English major in me XD
I'm also glad you like Millie! It's totally going to make super duper happy since she's her baby. I'm hoping to keep that mystery man a secret... lord knows how badly I already spoiled it on my lj and in past bits. *headdesk*
Thanks SO MUCH for all of these lovely words, I feel I could sit and reread them over and over, but then I'd never get the next chapter done |D
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hypermegatailsfan In reply to LadyOfOnyx [2011-06-25 11:27:12 +0000 UTC]
Awwww, thanks much! That's going to make someone's day...
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emochick9785 [2011-06-25 02:58:34 +0000 UTC]
YAY!!! MORE PIRATES!!!!
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bobtheenchantedone [2011-06-25 00:07:36 +0000 UTC]
Well.
It actually took me a second to remember what Hawkins was referring to. I am ashamed.
Sweet hips. *snicker*
Normally I'm a little annoyed with "oh, I so totally do not care about this person, nuh uh, no way." It's like SHUT UP WE KNOW YOU'RE GOING TO BE TOGETHER IN THE END GOSH. But how you did it, it's just adorable. I especially liked "They sat there for a long time, absolutely not caring about the other in any way, shape, or form."
Aw, poor Millie.
In summary, loved it even more than the first chapter, am eagerly awaiting more, you're the best, etc. etc.
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hypermegatailsfan In reply to bobtheenchantedone [2011-06-25 00:30:20 +0000 UTC]
It happens, no worries.
Me and friends have agreed that dem hips and dem legs are some of his favorite parts about her.
I can be a little annoyed with that too at times, but that childish way of thinking just really seemed to suit the story.
Glad to hear sympathy for Millie.
Thanks much, happy you liked it!
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