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hystericritic — Prison Stripes:: the c r a w l
Published: 2007-05-30 23:15:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 1800; Favourites: 46; Downloads: 32
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the splatters were way more trouble than they were worth. >< they don't even look that great, in fact, they detracted from the picture somehow. Oh well, i still like them. < Pets. > Just next time i wish they would cooperate.uhh i can't say too much, the title and the picture kind of speak for themselves.
thanks to ~insideaglassbox for helping me out with the feet.. which i still kind of fucked up.
Jess don't kill me! O:
Loren from fate at gunpoint by myself and ~Waltzer
india ink, water colours, coloured pencil, 3B pencil
inspired by a stock by *Cat-in-the-Stock
for the 'stripes' fashion challenge.
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Comments: 46
Whoa. Like wow this is seriously amazing and I love it a LOT. The splatters are pretty cool and kind of add a bit more dimension....
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Thank you very much, i'm glad you enjoyed it. (:
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Where can I find this story? =/ I searched for it, but I can't actually find it anywhere.
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This is amazing, I love the affect and your art style is beautiful.
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Thanks. Particularly for the style comment since I'm relatively wishy-washy over my style. :3
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ookkaayy ssooo wtf is wrong with me and why have i not commented on this until now? like i was just going through the awesomeness that is youe gallery and i saw i hadn't accosted you with a super long comment for this and i was like...oh hell no, i muusssstt annaalyysss iittt and so i shall, so first off DAWWW LOORRREEENN, when I frist saw this the first thing i though of was, SPIDERS the secound was i wanna bitch slap his parents, both of thses reactions i'm sure you understand. I love love love x a billion his position because it really does potray him on soo many levels, not in the whole ommgg lorreenn dessppaiirr heeee soo saaadd ommgg, but in his sort of barely getting by, how the fuck are you alive? way, the crawl is a great name for this picture and for the entirity of his existance really, this position and picture capture the conundrum that is Loren. Also i love how really to only color in this is his hair and the slight redish tone at the base of the picture, it really makes his head stand out and the importance of that is not lost on me and also the color just sets the mood for the picture, the grays and blacks and whites are perrect. i feel like someone has just smacked him and he's just now struggling to stand up and it's just been copy pasted from his life onto paper....so yeah...great job, your amazing, this picture is amazing Loren is amazing....just wow...loovveesssss
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AHhhhh thank you thank you i' was hoping to capture his emotional... turmoil... and angst in this picture and i'm glad i did it correctly. XD And yeah i think there are a couple of others that you've never commented on but i 'unno it's not like i'm keeping count or anything.... >> rofl i'm not but i could probably guess if someone held a gun to my head and told me to. anyway.
yayyy for long ass comments i'm glad yayyy 
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God this is a gorgeous piece. I can't even draw HALF as good.
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aw, don't talk like that!
thank you for a flattering comment and the fave. (:
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nice sense of movement, i quite like the splatters actually!
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Thanks for the comment and the fave.
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Excellent work! ^^
The feet are actually pretty good. o-o
I dunno what you think is so bad about them. 
Omg Uber fave, AGAIN. XD
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The shading, i don't like it at all. XD
Thanks though...
Thanks for the fave. 
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Awwwwh.
Your an excellent artist, I dont know why your not REALLY popular. D:
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>w< Thanks...
Deviantart is a huge community, so i'm not really surprised.
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Aw, thanks. Yeah, I'm glad i managed to get that through. xD Torment yay!
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I'm happy that my stock have partly inspired such a nice piece
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Thanks for providing with it.
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YAY!!! It turned out wonderfully, it really did. Don't worry too much about the feet, they look awesome, and everyone has difficulty with feet. I really love how his scarf fades away, and the splatters really add to the feeling of pain/impact. He looks almost ashamed in this one, ashamed to be in the position he's in i suppose. Wonderful work as usual XD
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Oh he is, he very much is quite ashamed to be where he is. 👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Thanks... ahhh feet.
okay, good thing... good comments about the splatters make the fact that they DRIPPED on his ASS a little less irksome. Kinda.
d'aw thanks.
p.s. i like the coloring of this, i like how the hair really stands out
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Thankssss. It stood out more before the splattering, because it was the only really lose/flowy thing on the page, but then the splatters came... but it's good to know that it still stnads out so i still basically got what i wanted.
there's SYMBOLISM in that bitch of hair, yes yes. but secret symbolism. i don't even know if it counts as symbolism, actuallly....
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well it kind of symbolizes everything he goes through, because a lot of what he goes through centers around his hair and his head.
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no pain! loren! no pain! happiness with me, and our little babies! NO PAIIIINNNNN
i hate you felisha, except not really because i love you dearly
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xDDD Right, happiness with little babies.
you're so silly. i love you jess.
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i know you love me, and YES HAPPINESS... with little babies
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The splatters add a sense of movement to this; I think that they were definitely worth it.
Btw, this is Lauren. (:
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yayyyy movement.
yeah, pretty much from the sketch i felt like this ought to have flow and movement... glad i achieved it. :3
I guessed. xD Ace. <3
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