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Published: 2015-02-20 12:12:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 2624; Favourites: 36; Downloads: 0
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Commission forThe sky was ablaze with splashes of pink and gold as the couple walked down the beach. Jet looked away, clearing his throat. He was undoubtedly nervous but...this was it, right? The arctic rose that he'd been holding in his vest. Valentine's was a day of love, a day of romance - and he was sure - or was he - that Boni would like it. Ahem. "She would like it..." he thought, reaching for the flower. "Here goes."
AAAAWWW YISS I am not dead peoples. I just went away for a bit to settle a hell lot of schoolwork and I'm really sorry for the absence. ANYWAYS! This comic right here. I think it's a suitable late Valentine's continuation to this:
ice-creamwolfie.deviantart.com…
They're just such a CUTE couple
They have so many differences that set them apart and yet they're together. I made their colour schemes different on purpose as well - Boni the gentle, girlish and sweet penguin, and Jet the cool, classy and 'calmer' one (hehehe not that calm in the second panel is he!) Overall the challenge was consistency across the three panels, cause making the characters look the same is kinda hard for me...oh yeah and gosh it's HARD to draw penguins interacting in close proximity. How many people can say they drew big beaked penguins kissing
Last was the background and lighting - see how it has an orange tint to the penguins in sunset light and stuff like that? There we go hahaha. Fun challenge to push things forward!Oh yeah Annie! ^_^ Do tell:
1. What you like about it?
2. What I got right?
3. What can I improve on?
And I really hope you like it!
Enjoy people, enjoy!
Yi Ling, 20/2/15
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Comments: 52
Aaaawww thanks buddy!
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Daawww indeed ^_^
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They're just too cute ;A;
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OH MY GOD IT'S THIS COMMENT X'D I can't believe you saved it till now HAHAHA
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THANKS MAN!
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You're welcome!
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Yeah now that I think about it it reminds me of 'All About That Bass'
AHHH DAMMIT now that song is in my head omg nuuuuuuuu
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Haha is her! Meghan Trainor, i did her like a penguin XD
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Oh that's really awesome! Yeah the colours from the video XD Omg. I love it! Well done!
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I KNOW RIGHT HEHEHE
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I love the facial expressions
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Thanks man! I think Jet in the second panel wins it all XD
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HOLY EDCFRGTYHUJ
I woke up a few a minutes ago and the first thing I find is this. What's ironic is you have like the best timing cause at the moment I'm feeling like utter crap gluten intolerance is mad at me omg whai. Ahhh this is so cute omg I love jet's face bwahhhhhh <3 <3 and you made it into panels and jdhfgydsud omg ;u; I seriously died with the kiss omg that's precious HHHHHHHH You sweetie jaysus omg
OKAY. FANGIRLING ASIDE
Well first off it's THREE PANELS hhhhhh that was unexpected omg. The background is absolutely amazing and the shading details are super well done. The poses are really original and have great dynamic to them and just overall they look great. Also, like you said, their color schemes do mix well. I love the clothing you put them in, Jet looks really handsome but is still staying IC y'know?
Boni's hair X'D her reaction.. Honestly this whole pic, I'm sorry I was not expecting this omg it's so precious. You did a great job on Boni's clothes and the look on her face in the first panel is like spot on for BonBon, I also have to say I think you were pretty on the spot with Jet's reaction there in the kiss.
The beaks at the bottoms seem to often show connection points or something, like the first and last panel they are easier to see. Maybe try adjusting that? Jet's head in the last panel, where the glasses are his head looks like it might be off? I may be wrong on that, however next time maybe try to make his eye more at an angle when closed, it for me somewhat looks like a random eyebrow at times. Other than that and work on the wrinkles in clothing but the picture is amazing ;u;
Sorry if this is sloppily done I'm just waking up and my stomach feels like I was thrown in the washing machine ;w;
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HAHA oh my god the GIF X'D Damn funny hahahahaha. And oh gosh THANK YOU so much for the points, that was actually far more than I expected 
YES dem panels. Since you were paying I decided to up the amount of pictures and make it more unique, originally it was gonna be them in the sunset, Jet passing a rose but meh that's like the most boring and cliche picture you can ever do of a couple lol. I had to see Jet's reaction to Boni's kiss cause in the first picture I did of them Jet was so sheepish!
Hmmmm yes the connection points, I can fix that... (I think cause I was trying to do it all in one smooth line like how the official artists do, but failed a little 
Eyebrow eye? Ahh shiz XD I don't get that part...I tried to make his smile look relaxed/relieved and I think I might have failed a bit omg. I'm not sure how to fix that...
As for the clothing wrinkles I'll work on it for future pics. ^_^ Thanks so much for taking the time to give such a lovely run-down critique man! Really helps!
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I was worried I would only be able to give you 100 due to the fact I have another chibi commission and only had like 400 points left, however I had like the perfect balance to be able to give you more ;u; you so totally deserved them omg.
I absolutely loved his reaction, I think it's so cute and just it fits really well especially with how surprised he seems ahh so cute I can't I'm dying again my OTP.
I honestly don't have any huge issues with it ;u; I just figured I would critique it in hopes to help you for future reference but I honestly just love it omg <3 <3 and idk, I think his smile is fine <3 Also, by the eyebrow thing I mostly mean because his eye seems to tilt up? It may just be me cause I'm dumb lol, but idk it just looked a bit off, then again I'm a dork who draws traditionally so what do I know >u<
And wrinkles weren't like a huge thing anyway, I just figured it was another helpful thing not to mention I have an obsession with putting wrinkles in my character's clothing SHHHH
Like I said ;u; I absolutely love it, don't take any of the criticism as I don't absolutely positively adore it cause I really do. Like I said this made my morning and I've been looking at it off and on all day 
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Daaaw thank you so much!
The kiss won the picture I think X'D It's the best panel in my opinion - hardest to pose, hardest to colour, but the most epic cause Boni plants one and his glasses flew off. My bro was saying "how come Jet Pack Guy is so surprised and funny" and I went "Cause love". LOL!
Tilt up...? You mean uhh...is it arcing too much upwards?
Aha and wrinkles. That one helps a LOT for pics with a lot of movement cause dynamics, when I draw more calmer pics I kinda forget
Hehehe and I told you it would be more than one scene or something like that didn't I 
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Omg that's awesome >u< yayy~~
That one is precious omg X3 and lol Yus. perfect answer
It's hard to explain X'D ignore me I think it's just me. And meh, it's not a catastrophic thing or anything >u< no biggy~
FFFFFF its so amazing
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Yeah man! Thanks so much ^_^ Next time if I draw these two again, I'd know how they do stuff. And I just realised that this is the most drawn couple on my page next to me and my bf. Plus I am not one for cheesy/lovey-dovey stuff aside from requests and commissions so - wow pretty amazing stuff
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Haha really? Well then I feel flattered ;v; thank ya~~
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No probs man ^_^ Anytime!
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Thanks man!! And I KNOW RIGHT they make such a cute couple hehehe
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Panel 2 wants me to puke but Jet's face makes me want to laugh harder, until you can hear it.
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Then you are too young for romance X'D
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MAKE MORE OF THAT JET FACE.
Oh c'mon, that mark.
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When I get the chance I will 
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Some derpy would just do.
*ahem* That mark. *throws self to Freddy Fazbear*
Anyway, how was your... uh, school?
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Huh what mark? Oh and school? I'm almost done with projects and stuff, like I am left with two major events for the year and I'm done with poly. FOREVER.
Oh yeah I will be continuing the requests stuff cause free time so be patient with me for Private's icon 
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Nah nothing sorry.
And then, you'd be a forever college student and become everyone's senior 'til you are 30 *throws self to the Cthulu*
I'll be waiting. And okay, looking at that Jet pic...
...you can do something funny with Private's face xD
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Wooo are so great <3
I'm sure Rambie will like it
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Thank you very much!
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From 2013 Marvel Party Sif is best Asgardian girl xd
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YES. YES SHE IS
I didn't recognize her armor though, but it looks super epic!
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OMG IKR XD
It's pretty hard to recognize her armor as penguin, I agree .u. And I agree again, it looks epic! sta.sh/01svn04l3ktj
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WOW that looks super cool O_O
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We shall thank CP for making Sif into CP.
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Yes, we shall cause Sif is such a badass yo. ALL HAIL CP
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