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pinbeak [2007-09-06 00:08:11 +0000 UTC]
I loved this - one of the best TMNT fanfictions I have read in a long time - very deep.
This is so faved...
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Lucca-Majere [2007-09-05 20:49:35 +0000 UTC]
T_T Even with as little as I know about TMNT, this was quite something. Made me sad for him. You have such a way of writing...first person sometimes comes off badly, but you pulled it off really well, I think.
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Mopar [2007-09-05 19:03:01 +0000 UTC]
This was completely unexpected. Jungle hmm? This is SO MUCH like Leo. You captured his character so well, and I can feel how he feels. I would feel the same way!
And I want to slap some sense into him! I think he's doing it to himself! Stop it!
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sonicsora [2007-09-05 08:03:20 +0000 UTC]
I think anyone would be homesick after being in a jungle so long, I've written a few takes on his jungle journey, none as great as this though!
I loved all the emotions you packed into this hun, also how you were able to get into Leo's character so well, show just how he'd be feeling through the whole thing. Your narrative kicks so much ass~
Great job on all of this hun, your writing is just so awesometastic.
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sonicsora In reply to Icequeenkitty [2007-09-05 23:47:28 +0000 UTC]
You wouldn't XD I'm very mean to him when he's in the jungle. Poor thing getting captured.
You're very welcome hun~ I do love this story~!
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Icequeenkitty In reply to sonicsora [2007-09-07 15:13:12 +0000 UTC]
D: Waaaaaaaaaaait. I do seem to recall reading something about a mutilated Leo being rescued from a circus by his brothers a while ago... Was that one? D: (<--- forgets to comment on about half of what she reads. )
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sonicsora In reply to Icequeenkitty [2007-09-08 02:14:29 +0000 UTC]
One of them, I have to much free time and tend to remake stories over and over again. (Thanks for reading it though <3's for that)
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