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Published: 2011-03-10 02:48:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 4395; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 75
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EDIT: OOOOKAAAAYYYYYY Getting rid of the pissy rant because . . . yeah . . .I've seen this a lot around, not just with me personally but just generally everywhere on deviantART. I get the point of roleplaying and pretending to be an animal just for fun. I mean I do it a lot; I often poke fun at myself for having "wings" and "a tail" but it's all in good fun and I know where to draw the line.
However . . . it's people like this that take it way too seriously and don't know when to stop. That's just childish and immature. Not to mention just plain retarded. And if you're coming to me, a person who spends a hell of a lot of time writing to try to get better and hopes to one day publish her stuff, you really better not pull this with me. I'm a nice gal. I'll critique whatever's sent my way. But if you treat me like crap, or whip these poor excuses out of your ass, I'm done. I don't have time for this nonsense so frankly I won't put up with it.
Know when to get serious, people.
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that what cool about you ichiko
me think MARVEL should rename falcon punch into griffin punch cause you are much cooler then captain falcon and you deserve much more atention and....griffin punch sounds more badass!!!
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...After reading this, I won't ask you to critique my WW3 story...due to the fact indents and paragraphs are my mortal enemy...
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This reminds me somehow of that little line between sanity and insanity... go figure.
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OMG BEST STOREH EVAR D8
but it's okey she got hit
cause punching kids is fun : D
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UGH.
I offer my services as a beta reader on ff.net, and I've had to refuse beta requests because I literally could not read the story I was asked to look at. And when I tell the person that I have better things to do than attempt to figure out what's going on in a story with such horrible sentence form that I can't read it, they get angry and start insulting me.
My soul weeps whenever I see anything like this. And people who honestly think that they're some kind of animal are...they're just...well, they're idiots. Having an internet persona with cat ears and a tail is one thing, but really, what's so bad about being human?
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How long did it take you to write that supar awesum storay?
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Haaaaaaaaaaaaah hah hah haha haaaaaaaaaaaa!
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Griffin PUNCH!!
I know how that is exactly. I don't speak Text, and Iām horrible at spelling and grammar myself.
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I win your internets: [link]
I'd also like to point out this was left yesterday. I could find you a real gem if i dig a little.
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*head desk*
I have lost faith in humanity.
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You're my hero.
FOREVER. HNNNNNNNG. I love you for this. ;-;
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Ok.....
Common sense is now a perquisite for writing anything worth or coming at least a little bit close to reading.
If people are going to ask for an honest opinion on there work they should take it to a respectable level of work.
Not some some bullshit that looks like it was done by a grade 6 on there phone using quick text....
So for this case, you have every right to be pissed to high hell.
Announcer: "And winner by T.K.O with in the first 5 seconds of the match is Ichiko Wind Griffin!!!!"
*Crowed cheers from all around.*
(Sub Note)
I think you need to do your action scenes when you are pissed.
You seem to get a lot more into it and your characters look like they have more of a flow to them.
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I have no idea. I think 5.
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...As a furry even I think that excuse is stupid. I'm all for 'Be the character' but Hell even your character should be able to read and write! As an (Amateurish) writer I'd have have used horrible thing I'm probably not allowed to write about
Also, Griffin.....PAUNCH
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The same thing happened to me a while ago! I was so pissed off that I had punched a hole in my wall! This guy (who has long since left this site) sent me a story that had barely (if any) periods, none of the words were spelled even the slightest bit right, and there were no fucking commas! I couldn't tell where I was for half of the story, and ended up giving up on trying to find my place because I had gotten a headache. So, in response to his plea for help was this:
"I'm sorry kid, but you're going to have to revise all of this yourself. I can't even read it because I lost my place so many times. What's the plot? What's going on? Where are you? If you want me to help you, you're going to have to write this without the "text talk" and figure those questions out. Also, I'm pretty sure that numbers aren't in any words in the English dictionary."
He replied: "wow ur such a fukin bich i cant beleve u wnt evn help me cuz i jus ask 4 help an u wnt giv it 2 me"
In responce to that, I blocked him from posting on my page. I swear, these people just get more and more obnoxious. Sometimes I have to wonder how they made it through elementary school or middle school with spelling, capitalization, and punctuation like that.
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I know, writing like that rots my poor poor brain >_O
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Wait did the person really write that and then use that as an excuse?
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Oh dear lord.... that is just messed up
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Well, this has made me lose any last bit of hope I had left for humanity. Sheesh.
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You and me both buddy.
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O_O....................................................................................................................................................................
I'm scared now!
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Wai-what?
That has got to be the craziest excuse for poor story construction I have ever seen... (crazy and poor being the understatements in the sentence)
I'm hoping to every God I can name that it's a troll.
*holds up bin-lid shield* and now I feel rather too afraid to ask for your critique on anything...
*tiptoes away*
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As long as you're not an idiot you're good :3
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I could not honestly agree with you more, a writer with a mini-ego and a delusional standpoint on what screws up their writing (if it isn't bad enough) gets annoying when they go and ask for help and come up with a ridiculous reason. But, stupidity will live everywhere, and better to ignore the idiots.
Because if you start arguing with an idiot, they will make you stoop to their level. and at that level they can beat you.
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Dang, if I wrote that bad, I'd be head-desking till my head was little more than mush. I may have horrible grammar, but good god, at least I skim over a few times to check for mistakes! I've seen bad writing around on DA, but... damn. And yes, I can agree that it is, by far, the worst, and lamest excuse ever. Have the common sense to at least recognize that you are to blame, jeez! Grow a backbone.
And just to clear this up, you don't like people saying you are a furry artist, not furries in general(as stupid and idiotic as they may be)?
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Well I'm fine with furries . . . until they get all horny over my work. l:[ To me thaaaat's a little insulting.
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Um... yeah, I can't see any way to do that anyway. It's just good work, not sexy or anything >.=.<
What people will do to get something like that these days...
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i never read so many curses in just such an small text ... i like it
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Wow... I can't really think of a response, that's acctually really terrifying that the person sent that to you
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Well I love you more :V
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So is the lower part of the description her answer? Is it just me or did her grammar get better?
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No, she said that she wrote better as a dragon, in the comments I'm just stating my reaction to such a comment.
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Derp! My mistake!
Also, her writing amuses me endlessly, it's like reading My Immortall XD
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Now i'm almost afraid to ever ask for help again, because i'm afraid i'll end up like her.
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Just don't be a complete idiot and you'll be fiiiiiiiiiine :3
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Relieved (somewhat)
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